All Comments on 'Delicious'

There is no way to resist reading a story whose author describes it as "poorly written crap" and who expresses surprise that it was accepted!

"Delicious" could have used a good line edit and a bit of rework here and there, but it's far from being the godawful drivel you described in the forums.

I, for one, enjoyed reading it, and I'd love to read the rejected stories that you regard as being better. Perhaps they got axed not because of lack of merit but rather because they violated some chiseled-in-stone policy?

... was mentioned in the new story thread.

Here is the review thread:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=428901

Here is the thread that you can comment on the review:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=428875

Have a lovely day,

Lizzy

I really loved this, JJ.

It was a sexy, wicked treat that took the edge off the long wait for Halloween! Great work.