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I loved the flow of this story
I'm a cop and i could see this happening. the action was right on, just like i was there. Good work man!
Not the usual
kind of story that I read here. It was great! Nice job.
Just another day on the Job
super story loved it from start to finish.
Novel Stretch About Braindead Wife
Would you really - want to be around this woman the next time he accidently leaves something around say a science fiction novel on blood letting with giant leaches?
Fiction eh - Nice imagination Author - more please!
Good
It will teach the husband the danger of picking up trash.
Boyd
Creative
Now this was one creative piece of writing. The ‘Hildy’ scenario has been used in a number of stories, but mainly as an act of revenge. This is the first presentation that turns the accidental cuckolding into an act of love; and it was credible. Well done!
A very good story
I loved the story and the how the cuckolding triggered Will's future with Donna. Thanks for the words.
Excellent
Excellent story. Very creative, I've never read anything like it! It was short, sweet, and to the point! And it actually had a point! :) Loved it!
Liked it
This was a really fine story. The main story, about a man too dumb to understand that he was enjoying the benefits of marriage while denying his wife the honor of public committment, was well drawn. The inner story, of the domestic disturbance, was almost but not quite over the top. It certainly underlines the need to talk effectively.
Very good work
No words to describe this submission. Awesome? Great? Fantastic? Naw...too mild. Simply fantabulous. Did I overly praise you? Not really. I personally think you are those rare writers that are simply wonderful.
Very good, touching, realistic plot. Yes, sometimes women (some) can be quite dumb when comes to affairs of the heart. Impulsive. The situation you describe does happen to normal average people and you certainly nail it.
Two thumbs up.
p/s A small niggling problem. Your 'lose' and 'loose' :)
Strange take on wife thinking of only her husband
I obviously missed this story of yours a few days ago. I haven’t read the other comments as I have a bone to pick with the wife’s love of her husband.
Now if you truly love someone that means to most people you trust them and feel you can talk to them. If not it is a one-sided love bound to failure as long as the lack of comfort exists.
If the wife loved him she would have questioned him about his fantasies before she did something she says she didn’t want to do. This woman is not in love with her husband totally as she can not talk to him about sensitive subjects. They have a real problem and she may not be telling all that was going through her mind in this escapade.
That’s my take on the story. It was so well done but unbelievable conclusions were drawn to fit someone’s idea of what a marriage entails.
Looking forward to your next story.
PT
fine work
That is a cheating wife I can understand but never want for myself.
Thanks
The wife was a bit dumb, stupid more correctly.
Now how was the man being secured and covered with a hood without his consent? Bareback sex? You have to be kidding. And a year of medical testing to be declared free of most of the nice things she could have gotten in the stupidity. What man would want a wife that dumb? Thee basic premise of living together but not married preventing domestic disputes is lost on me. You probably get more domestic disputes from unmarrieds than you do from marrieds. Boyfriends and girlfriends living in separate quarters also get into domestic disputes, avoiding marriage does not prevent domestic disputes, beatings, or murder.
Hell with good medical testing he should be able
to have protected sex with her in six months and if all stays negative bareback sex with her in a year. Personally I would not want someone that stupid living with me and a divorce would have been the final chapter of that book.
Short and sweet
A man grew up - to full adult hood over night
good story
It to him lon enough t undertand that Donna loved him completely and it took another woman to prove it to him. 5 stars
But Officer
I love my man so much that when he told me to get out there and put my money maker to work with the rest of his girls I just had to do it.
If she really loved him, she would have confronted him to demand that he seek help with his mental illness. You don't show love by being evil.
As far as the cop growing up; bravo.
Good Story
Good story is there a part 2 Please. Love you all! Bye. Greg.
sad
but there are people just like this.
HE WAS RIGHT FROM THE START
but the lonely alternative is too much to bear, TK U MLJ LV NV
Burn
There was a comment for this story that said "good, that will teach him to pick up trash" So any body who is a good Samaritan and picks up some litter deserves to have their world come crashing down? You are scum!
The wife in this story was just retarded. Just ties him up and fucks someone without even talking to him? That's a level of stupidity that should have her in a home or she should have a permanent guardian since she is obviously not intelligent enough to make decisions for herself or others. God forbid they ever have children.
Not a big fan of police since they are responsible for more Americans dying than the war in the middle east this past year. Pretty sad.
???
Who called 911? THAT IS NOT LOVE!!! I would divorce that stupid bitch...
This can be love.
This can be love, maybe in a wrong way (and I would not share), but I can understand that someone loves so much to get to do this if they think their marriage is in danger.
I agree that it is more convenient to talk and clarify things, but there are always people who act desperate. Besides this served to finally unite Will and Donna, and, hell, this is Lit, some erotic license should have, right?
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet),is not my native language.
Adultery
Cheating stories not flagged as cheating automatically get a 1 just like rape torture and murder stories that aren't flagged. I hate cheaters. This married couple is too stupid to live. I bet she is one of those people who spend hours at the grocery store staring at cans of frozen orange juice with smoke pouring out of her empty head.
I have made the comment before that any person who puts a job before their significant other doesn't deserve that significant other because they should be number one in your life taking all precedence over Everything else accept children. People are important, people need to get their priorities straight.
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