is how fucking boring it is
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Anonymous07/17/06
LOL
wow, its still on. there's nothing erotic about this series. its blah.
cant wait for the next chapter (rolleyes).
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Anonymous07/17/06
Let her get cought
Let him get a tape of the train on Friday and end this, he can send her packing.
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Anonymous07/17/06
He's perfect for her and her for him
What you have here is a dumb fuck husband that is overpaid on his job because he's just plain stupid. Then you have a cheating wife that claimes to love Gary. That's so much bull crap. A real smart woman would tape it all and let hubby know and then he would own the company because of sexual harassment. Naturally she could sue the motel for the boys spying on her and taping it..But noooo... she;s just interested in getting her tubes plumbed and Gary... he's picking daiseys..Sorry Bob, your writing skill is great but your imagination sucks...
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Anonymous07/17/06
A repeat of another site
Just keeps doing it all over and over again and it ends like it is now.
I don't typically leave comments but I was affected by the mean spirited nature of the previous remarks.
There is nothing wrong with your story and if folks don't like it, they don't have to read the damn thing.
I just don't understand why folks take this kind of opportunity to prove how rude and intentionally, disrespectful they can be. I mean, why???
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Anonymous07/17/06
Dearest Gspotman
You complain that we disrespect bobie. As a writer do you constantly demean males as wimps, watchers, pimps, and self cuckolders?
Do you think that your every story would be graded as an "H" if you didn't respect any of your characters - if you made your husband male characters weak wussies that liked to be cuckolded or that pimped out their wives at every turn then watched their pleasure gleefully or helplessly not doing anything that a normal male would?
Jeez - cheerlead someone who sometimes acts like a real male at least part of the time - weak pathetic helpless males into humiliation are bobie's staple for the few who need humiliation - who need to be offended all the time.
English
what is amazing about this story
is how fucking boring it is
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LOL
wow, its still on. there's nothing erotic about this series. its blah.
cant wait for the next chapter (rolleyes).
Let her get cought
Let him get a tape of the train on Friday and end this, he can send her packing.
He's perfect for her and her for him
What you have here is a dumb fuck husband that is overpaid on his job because he's just plain stupid. Then you have a cheating wife that claimes to love Gary. That's so much bull crap. A real smart woman would tape it all and let hubby know and then he would own the company because of sexual harassment. Naturally she could sue the motel for the boys spying on her and taping it..But noooo... she;s just interested in getting her tubes plumbed and Gary... he's picking daiseys..Sorry Bob, your writing skill is great but your imagination sucks...
A repeat of another site
Just keeps doing it all over and over again and it ends like it is now.
These comments are ridiculous.
I don't typically leave comments but I was affected by the mean spirited nature of the previous remarks.
There is nothing wrong with your story and if folks don't like it, they don't have to read the damn thing.
I just don't understand why folks take this kind of opportunity to prove how rude and intentionally, disrespectful they can be. I mean, why???
Dearest Gspotman
You complain that we disrespect bobie. As a writer do you constantly demean males as wimps, watchers, pimps, and self cuckolders?
Do you think that your every story would be graded as an "H" if you didn't respect any of your characters - if you made your husband male characters weak wussies that liked to be cuckolded or that pimped out their wives at every turn then watched their pleasure gleefully or helplessly not doing anything that a normal male would?
Jeez - cheerlead someone who sometimes acts like a real male at least part of the time - weak pathetic helpless males into humiliation are bobie's staple for the few who need humiliation - who need to be offended all the time.
Erotic eh.
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