Somehow or rather I have this feeling you were trying to piss off certain people here, :) I mean what's with the 5a and 5 b. Similar beginning except somewhere towards the end was a slight difference.
Are you trying to ask the readers to select which chapter was better? Chuckle, that would prove to be a futile effort my dear JPB.
As I've said before writing skill good but plot sucks. The last one I intended to rate you 75 but I somehow pressed the 100 so today I'm going to give you 50 which will balance out the score.
Can't wait to read some really 'sweet' reviews :p. Head-up man.
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Somehow or rather I have this feeling you were trying to piss off certain people here, :) I mean what's with the 5a and 5 b. Similar beginning except somewhere towards the end was a slight difference.
Are you trying to ask the readers to select which chapter was better? Chuckle, that would prove to be a futile effort my dear JPB.
As I've said before writing skill good but plot sucks. The last one I intended to rate you 75 but I somehow pressed the 100 so today I'm going to give you 50 which will balance out the score.
Can't wait to read some really 'sweet' reviews :p. Head-up man.
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