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Sorry!
I know that you tried to write a good story but...it has to be believable...All the wife had to say was that Ralph was raping her and that Clyde came in and rescued her and then got nmad at her for inviting him in the first place...Simple see...that's reality
Way to go Clyde
Nice to see a story about a guy behaving in a somewhat normal manner instead of pretending, collecting evidence, hatching some crazy scheme, or deciding he gets off on it. Im not a big fan of lost years but you didnt go overboard on his time in jail so it wasnt bad. Still allowed for a happy ending even with his jail time since their marriage was better and they were better of financially.
I dont mind the husbands sneaking around playing PI either but this was a nice change of pace from the overly intellectual husbands we usually see in these stories.
Thanks for writing.
Good story DG
That one commenter was all wet. Ralph wasn't raping her and she did invite him in. She ended up telling the truth. Clyde went over board but shit happens. Who could blame him? Like he said. He 'Paid the price'. Always a good read from you DG.
An avid fan
Good
good story and nicely written. good job, as always.
One of the best
One of the best on here.. All the wimpe out there need to take notice. You fuck up and some guy will take your place... I belive this story should be a winner.. Thank DG for puting my life in to words.. Thanks Gary badass2at prodigydotnet
Very well done!
DG,
I told you I don't care much for this catasgory, but this one is just right. No wimp, just a proper reaction and result. In quite a few states he would have gotten away with it, to bad they lived in the wrong one.
Excellent
A shame Clyde had to pay for such a piece of shit like Ralph, but, mistakes were made. And Ralph was invited in and she wasn't resisting him. Laws vary so much from state. But it is an excellent story!
Good, but there's one nagging unconsistancy
A guy whose testicles were surgically removed is not likely to be trying to seduce anyone afterwards. Castration brings about hormonal changes that normally interfere with such behavior.
Would a sane man visit Clyde and tell him
he was goig to fuck his wife? Ralph was probably lucky he was shot rather than be around when Clyde was released. AS I understand it, castration means you can't have children; NOT that you can't get it up and get it in.
Good story about an honest, forthright, loving man, and wife.
Real down to earth people, a wonderful LW story
The only thing I can say is this is a fantastic Loving Wives story. It hits on all cylinders and was a true joy to read. It just made so much sense and still had a bit of mystery to take it over the top
Another great DG story
Thank you so much
PT
One of your very best!!!!!
What can I say? Yet another super DG story. All I can say is this is truly a fantastic Loving Wives story and not at all like the general run of LW tales. The plot and characterisation puts it into the 'masterpiece' class and you, DG, into the master author class. Well done! Pete.
Sorry
Sorry I couldn't stomach enough of this garbage to read past him walking in on her. The intro at least let me know where you were coming from. For the "manly man" in you, that needs vindication by being a macho jerk, I hope you feel better now.
A legend in our times!
An urban legend! They both had a lot of attitude and temper and they both felt very real! Congratulations! Plus you added to the story a flavor of a modern western –turning CLYDE (a coincidence –I wonder?) into an urban legend of our times Cheers! To good stories convincing reconciliations and of course high testosterone!
So little
It takes so little to become an urban legend?
"I know I sound like a prick" was perhaps the most realistic sentence in the whole story.
I can smell the testosterone from here!
As usual Peatbog is right on!
This was a well written tale with good characterization.
Good job, as usual.
Regards, DJ
arguably Your worst story ever! Its awful
wow this is one awful contrived story...
I can hardly believe its from DG Hear one of the best writers here. Jesus ths story sucks shit on toast.
where to begin? Again we have a wife that accuses the hubby of cheating... accused him repeatedly... goes out of her way to protecet the OTHER guy... the guy that ends up almost raping her...
Frankly its very sad that such a thing did NOT happen to the whore wife
The other guy is stripping off her clothles and panties and she NEVER says NO...
CONSIDER
After the Husband beats up the other guy at the point of the attempted rape the wife has weeks maybe MONTHS to think about what she did... how awful her actions were... how damaging what she did WAS to the marriage....
so how does she try and fix it?. BY making sure her own hubby goes to Jail for 4 years with her false testimony...
"Oh I love you so.... boo hoo Boo hooo...."
why would any man want to reconcile with this vile nasty twisted bitch?
The Hubby did NOT do a fucking thing wrong -- talaing to a woman and saying no thank you I am not interested is the COrRECT thing to so...
man dick out in your house and you not home
you get 4yrs,come on that over the top.to much drama can kill a story.
I dont get it
what the Hell is wrong with you people? I dont agree with Harry very often but this story has a wife that is either the greatest Liar of all time of the stupidest person of all time
Consider her testimony
He started undoing the buttons on my blouse and pulled my bra over my breasts. I didn't know what I was doing. I didn't want this man. I wanted my Clyde, but I sat there and let him touch me
then she says to Clyde in jail
know you might not believe me but, I don't think (I guess she wasn't certain) I would have gone any further than I did. I felt so guilty. I was almost glad to see you come in.
So we have a wife
who believed any rumor about her husband
BUT would not give him a chance to defend himself while she supposedly really loves Clyde
but some how gosh darn her Boobs came and her tits were getting sucked .... but she really No idea how that happened
This other guy is stripping off her clothes and panties and by her own testimony in court and her words to Clyde she NEVER said NO .... she never said STOP .
Yeah I want to be
Story of two dummys
Your stories are always well witten, but when you make your hero act like an ass-hole and his wife act like a naive dummy it's hard to have much sympathy for either of them. Clyde I think is probably dumber than his wife,who has to get a job because of a tight budget.While wifey is working o make ends meet, dummy is blowing money at the local bar after having wasted a pile on a brand new TV that apparently sits at home. Whether he's cheating or not if they're short of cash dummy buying drinks for himself and the girls at the local bar doesn't do much for the budget.
60 year old George
Not making a comment on the story per se but i wou
like to say that you have put all the wimp husbands in their place properly and you even explained it so even an idiot can understand...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
whoa
what a load of JUNK!!! GUYS DONT READ THIS!!!! IT is a waste of time! if you are the kind of person who reads the comments first to see how good the story is........ TURN BACK NOW. DONT READ THIS CRAP.
WORST
You're getting worst with you're stories not even close to believeable no two people are that dumb outside of yourself of course.
Very good story.
This is a excellent story. It's so good that you did't have to put sex in it. That made it even better. Do'nt worry about the ones who did'nt like it. They were looking for pictures. (smile)
I think the story was very good
The characters were real and the writing was excellent. A fast moving story with a lot of believable action. Thanks .........Rich
AWesome!
This is the way to handle a cheating wife and her lover,not like those sissy wimp ass fools who like being shit on!
Wow, what a great story!
She kind of got away with it but the seducer got his "due".
Well done!
Actually it is not unusual...
...for people to have a hard time lying on the stand.So the people were stupid.That doesn't detract from the story one bit.Makes it more believable.
Communication indeed!
I think the message old Clyde sent out, by his actions with Ralph, made it clear that you don't mess around with Clyde or his missus. I thought it was one of your better stories. Thanks for all your work on behalf of this site.
Did I miss something?
Did I miss the part where Ralph grew a new set of balls? Because if he didn't, then trying to have intercourse with any woman would be a miracle in the order of the immaculate conception. Although I believe the mentality of Clyde's character certainly points to hit first and grunt later. The author needs to be a little more cerebral, and do the thinking before posting an incomplete story.
mandy's right..
When I read Ralph lost his balls, I was thinking he couldn't get it up anymore. I completely forgot about it by the time I read he was coming onto Sue, and only realised there was probably something wrong when I read Mandy's comment. A lack of testosterone leads to feminisation of a man. I'm not sure how he could have sex.. but he could get hormone replacement or he could take it up the ass! ;) It's not too far-fetched for Ralph to ask a doctor about he could get an erection with no balls, and being prescribed steroids.
Maybe Ralph's like That Yellow Bastard
The creepy rapist from Sin City who turned yellow as a side-effect of regrowing his genitals.
Hmm
I liked this one better then Laws of the Heart.
It still seemed a bit stilted in the dialouge, but worlds better.
What I valued most is the realistic details. He beats the hell out of a guy, he goes to jail. She gets pumped full of jism, and she is cupping her vagina so it doesn't just drip on the floor. Obviously most of the other writers seem to think that women LOVE to have sperm dripping down their thighs and all over the floor so everyone knows what they're doing, even if they don't have to clean the floor. Most women aren't like that AFAIK.
However...the guy keeps going on and on about communication, tediously so, but once he gets out, he NEVER asks his wife if she shot the bastard. Great communication skills dude. (flips thumb up) One would think he would at least obliquely address the issue since it was what made him finally forgive her, at least as far as I see it in the story.
After all, nothing says true love like homicide. (Just kidding)
It is a well written and plausible story.
There probably are many evil people like Clyde. However, even though I like that this story is different, I don't care to read about stupid and violent husbands.
Certainly he is stupid for talking to the police. It doesn't matter if you are innocent or not, other then, providing name, SSN, and address, the rule is never talk to the police and there is no such thing as "Off the record."
Because it is not a story I like, I have it a lower rating. Without the violence, I would have rated it 5 stars.
I rated a 5 DG
it amazes me that a judgemental asshole like dwornock would say this a violent story. Please Clyde handled his business. Your telling me you would just walk away with your tale tucked, like a little bitch. Clyde is the man.
that was good!
no complaints...
DWmoronic is so stupid
you have to dig for her IQ
Well, you got a 5* from me.
Although the violence was a little over the top, and based on what he heard when he walked in, was over the top with his wife as well, I still like a guy with guts. I think one, well placed, short right cross to the jaw whould have sufficed...well, maybe a couple to the ribs as well. :-)
Good story.
Nice ending -
Not a stretch - the ground work was clearly laid - but we were never sure about it - especially with the wig he found in her drawer.
Well executed -
Sometimes.
Sometimes, virtue has its rewards, as well as being its own reward.
PRICE AND COST
are worlds apart. TK U MLJ LV NV
Good Read***
Clyde handle things very well. A little ass kicking goes a long way!!!! Thanks for sharing.
Excellent
You take care of business, pay the price, and then resume living.
And then you woke up.
HA
i like clyde
the only thing i don't agree with is getting back with her.
she made the effort, gave the attention to another man, and called him over and started to get naked. She didn't file assault, rape, or harassment against the guy so she has no leg to stand on.
You took a good man and made him a wimp in the end personally.
Meh
So-so story. He may have jumped some guy from behind, and kicked 7 shades of shit out of him, but he is still a wimp. Anyone that takes a cheater back is a loser and a wimp. Circumstances and intentions don't matter when the deed is done. We all have choices in this life, and when you decide to cheat, it doesn't matter why or how far you went, you're a fucking cheater. Anyone so mentally weak, and emotionally dependant that they would rather stay married at any cost, even to a cheater, than spend any amount of time alone is a wimp!
Pile of shit
So we have the usual wife that will believe anything said about her husband, won't believe a word He says, and takes any opportunity to get sex on the side. How did Brad end up at the house while hubby was away? SHE invited him, thats how! And not for a cup of coffee either. She didn't know what was happening? Is she brain dead? Walk up to ANY woman, open her blouse and feel up her tits, I dare you. See what happens! And then SHE convicts her own husband. A wife CANNOT legally be forced to testify against her own husband under ANY circumstances, unless she decides that she wants to do it. The lawyer would have told her this, as he is legally required to, yet she still decided to do it. Why?, if for no other reason than to ensure conviction. And then it takes her MONTHS to visit the man she claims to love? Was she busy stock-taking at the store?Hers is the kind of love you don't need!
I agree with the previous comment, He IS a fucking wimp for taking her back! She disrespects him for months, treats him like shit, accused him of cheating when he wasn't, cheats herself for no other reason than he was out of the house, Intentionally gets him sent to jail, and he STILL takes her back, because she is good in bed? Horse shit. Being able to beat up someone physically, doesn't mean you are not a wimp. Saying that "I am not a wimp",doesn't make it so. Staying with someone that cheats on you, out of fear of being alone, makes you a wimp, no matter how big you are.
Closed minded commenters
While the wife was a stupid bitch for falling for Ralph's BS, (not Brad) probably the only reason she thought Clyde might looking for some strange is because she was severely limiting access to her pussy so even if he was it was partially her fault. A lot of what happens in stories on this site don't happen at all like they are written about, but women trying to control men with rationing sex is fairly common, and is extremely destructive to marriages. My guess is as much as 1/3 of divorces are caused by such mind games. Even if the man doesn't look elsewhere it erodes closeness and trust. Obviously both parties are grouchier while sexually frustrated. The residual effect of continual rejection effects the man's mental wellbeing. One or both parties are likely to limit physical affection, because while its true most men don't crave cuddling the same way women do they will likely avoid it more strenuously when getting worked up will only end in frustration, the diminished playful flirting results in more emotional distance. I know my wife's (now ex-wife) frigidity sapped the cheerfulness out of my personality.
I used to joke that when my wife (ex-wife) would remove her jeans to change for bed the furnace would kick in. Other jokes I would tell were she needed a defroster for her panty liners and that she thought oral sex was talking about it, and she wanted no part of that either.
I actually thought reconciliation was acceptable in this case despite what krosis666 and ANON 6/24/14 state. Some people are either so jaded or insecure in their manhood they see wimps and cucks where there are none. I hate cuck stories and think they should have their own category so real men don't have to inadvertently read them, but limp wristed commenters who call any male character who doesn't maim or murder every adulterous pair are just as sickening. People do sometimes just make a mistake, and people do really change. Its about being real, being able forgive and ultimately whether trust can be re-established.
Overall a well written and enjoyable read.
should have.....
Clyde should have said that he heard Mandy say no telling Ralph to stop, then Ralph continuing was sexual assault and Clyde was defending her = no charges.
She backs the story or divorce.
After the legalities from the defense were taken care of would be the time to put her to the curb or at the least get her to understand that if the way she is toward him does not change then it will happen.
Good Story!
Liked the way the story was developed and that it wasn't dragged out. ~ Mandy was largely at fault for the negative drama that unfolded.First,she just took Ralph's word that Clyde was tooting the bimbo at the bar,and secondly,she was playing head games with her husband by denying him sex as punishment when he did't behave the way she wanted. That had to cause some anger and a whole lot of resentment on his part. Control,withholding sex,anger,and resentment are all major contributors in fostering a relationship that had them drifting further and further apart and leading to a total lack of communication. ~ It was good to see their renewed love,commitment,and yes,much more "hiding the salami" after Clyde got sprung. An unusual "happy ending" for these kind of stories. ~ Kudos to the author for a story well done!
oh yeah
I have read a lot of your stories and I haven't been disappointed yet. this particular story I have read twice ( second by accident ) and this story is so great because it shows what a real man would do in a case like this. good story, good job just like your other stories that I have read keep up the great job and thank you got writing a story about a real man.
Luger?
Why would it be illegal to own a Luger with a firing pin in it? How did they know it was a Luger that shot Ralph? It could have been any 9mm pistol, and that probably covers about 75% of all pistols (which shoot "9mm Luger" rounds).
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