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by Anonymous

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by Texas Tease07/15/06

I want more!

What happens next? You have to continue this story!

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by Anonymous07/17/06

yes!!!!!

I agree with the last comment, continue the story, you did a great job for 1st submission to the site.

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by Anonymous08/05/06

NEED MORE

Where's the rest? We want more!

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by Anonymous04/11/07

Please continue the story :)

This was so beautiful! I would love to read an ending.

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by pussycat1807/14/07

wow!!!!!

Wow this was hot as. Please write more I have to know what happened. Thanks for getting me the wettest i have been in a while just from a story. Looking forward to more :D

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by EbonyFire7708/31/07

MORE MORE MORE!!

Continue this story PLEASE!! Don't leave us at the edge (for some of us, literally :P)! We'd like to see a part 2.

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