buy a shotgun before you vecome a surrogate man & dad
by
Anonymous07/17/06
Three chapters
and Laurel hasn't even been fucked or knocked up by another man. What in the fuck has Literotica become. She should have cuckolded her husband already with at least 5 separate men, been gangbanged at least twice, and either be knocked up or infected with an STD , (maybe both), and last but not least, her husband should have been initiated into slavery in his own house , eating creampies from a live in lover or two. Last but not least, pissed on or have had his mouth shit in. SHHEESH!!!
by
Anonymous07/17/06
Tedious...
What else can I say?
by
Anonymous07/17/06
Very Erotic Buildup!
I am really enjoying your writing. I can hardly wait for her adventure wit:"Carl" and I'm especially waiting for some future episode of her slowly stripping for her husband at home and then turning slowly to the side and rubbing her hand over her "he then notices beginning to bulge, tummy" and to her wide eyed amazed husband says, " I guess it time you knew! You soon would of course anyway! But, honey, here you can see for yourself. We're going to be parents. I'm expecting. I just couldn't help myself. With the turnon of the mutual flashing and then my "extranarital affair" I just got so incredibly turned on I got a little careless with my birth control when I was with him.
True, the baby won't have your genetics, but he wants nothing to do with fatherhood so you and I will be able to raise "OUR" child as if you are the biological father, and we can tell our families and friends that you are the father even though you and I will always know it's not of course.
by
Anonymous07/17/06
Nice
Very nice story. I was confused some. Who was Richard? I suspect you changed the name to Brett and missed a few.
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buy a shotgun before you vecome a surrogate man & dad
Three chapters
and Laurel hasn't even been fucked or knocked up by another man. What in the fuck has Literotica become. She should have cuckolded her husband already with at least 5 separate men, been gangbanged at least twice, and either be knocked up or infected with an STD , (maybe both), and last but not least, her husband should have been initiated into slavery in his own house , eating creampies from a live in lover or two. Last but not least, pissed on or have had his mouth shit in. SHHEESH!!!
Tedious...
What else can I say?
Very Erotic Buildup!
I am really enjoying your writing. I can hardly wait for her adventure wit:"Carl" and I'm especially waiting for some future episode of her slowly stripping for her husband at home and then turning slowly to the side and rubbing her hand over her "he then notices beginning to bulge, tummy" and to her wide eyed amazed husband says, " I guess it time you knew! You soon would of course anyway! But, honey, here you can see for yourself. We're going to be parents. I'm expecting. I just couldn't help myself. With the turnon of the mutual flashing and then my "extranarital affair" I just got so incredibly turned on I got a little careless with my birth control when I was with him.
True, the baby won't have your genetics, but he wants nothing to do with fatherhood so you and I will be able to raise "OUR" child as if you are the biological father, and we can tell our families and friends that you are the father even though you and I will always know it's not of course.
Nice
Very nice story. I was confused some. Who was Richard? I suspect you changed the name to Brett and missed a few.
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And it continues
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