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Lauren and Carl Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/18/06

Yea!!

So they fucked,,,,what else is new???

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by Anonymous07/18/06

short memory

Wives always seem to feel it more exciting with someone else besides their husband and blame it on the moment or drinks instead of remembering why they got married and who to. Loyalty and sex should'nt die after eating the wedding cake it should be the catylist of a two part mix.

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by Anonymous07/18/06

Finally Fucked

Now comes the husband telling the reader that after Carl had knocked her up, that he had moved in with Lauren and her husband, and that Carl had quit his job so he could fuck Lauren full time. The husband is so overwhelmed by her revelation that he wants to watch and masturbate. Carl tells him ok but Lauren tells him that he can watch if she and Carl can piss on him and shit in his mouth.

The husband was no longer allowed to fuck her ever again. His responsibility was to provide for the 4 children they would eventually have together and suck cum out of Lauren's pussy to save money on disposable douches so that money could be spent on diapers and baby food. He even buys Carl a new BMW 7 series as a bonus for impregnating Lauren twice in one year. He has always wanted children but Lauren didn't want any with him.What a story!!! How original.

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by Anonymous07/18/06

I liked it

And I hope it wasn't the last chapter.

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by Anonymous07/18/06

Some writers

really let their fantasies run away with them. Lauren is a cheat. What does the hubby get out of it...nothing. He don't watch. He don't eat the cum out of her. He doesn't get to suck the guy's cock himself. He goes on a trip. Well all kinds

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by Anonymous07/18/06

Nice

I thought it was an exciting read. Anyone who read this and got upset is obviously looking in the wrong story category or more likely surfing the wrong site.

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by Anonymous07/19/06

Yummy.

It would be my bday surpise gift everytime a gorgeous girl like that fucked me.

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by impo_6003/02/15

After months of pleading?

A husband pleads during months for his wife to confess what he already knew? And she confesses that she was jealous of her lover talking with another woman? And he accepts it again? That is sad...very sad...1*

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by Joeehartley07/25/15

Glad it happened

It happened. Next time let them both be more sober.

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