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Way to go, J.K.!
Nice to see you finally posted one where someone other that just your close friends could read them. However, you did rather leave non-readers 'in the dark' so to speak on this one. ~LOL~ Talk to later.
I'm also glad you posted this...
I remember reading this when I first met you. I also remembered telling you then that I hoped you would give more details as to what Collin was doing with the slave boy... ;-)
Anywho... Still like this...
Are you having problems identifying the characters
Some people have told me they are having problems figuring out which of my characters are human. These stories are written rather realistically. If you are wondering, probably so is my main character. Then, I get comments about the backgrounds of main characters. You only know what the character telling the story sees. Sometimes I add more simply because I must, but I don't like to give away more than the main character knows. It keeps you guessing, and hopefully reading, but more than that...It helps you understand what the characters are actually feeling, too.
Too many main characters.
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