All Comments  for

A Simple Shadow Pt. 01

byNymzanSusauren©
All
Comments (4)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/02/06

Way to go, J.K.!

Nice to see you finally posted one where someone other that just your close friends could read them. However, you did rather leave non-readers 'in the dark' so to speak on this one. ~LOL~ Talk to later.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by windstormy03/18/07

I'm also glad you posted this...

I remember reading this when I first met you. I also remembered telling you then that I hoped you would give more details as to what Collin was doing with the slave boy... ;-)

Anywho... Still like this...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/25/07

Are you having problems identifying the characters

Some people have told me they are having problems figuring out which of my characters are human. These stories are written rather realistically. If you are wondering, probably so is my main character. Then, I get comments about the backgrounds of main characters. You only know what the character telling the story sees. Sometimes I add more simply because I must, but I don't like to give away more than the main character knows. It keeps you guessing, and hopefully reading, but more than that...It helps you understand what the characters are actually feeling, too.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/23/16

Too many main characters.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to A Simple Shadow Pt. 01  or
More submissions by NymzanSusauren.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel