All Comments on 'The Intruder'

Now this is a true Ncr story. It was the perfect the way you protrayed each of these characters. She, obviously not wanting to be violated and then having to accept her body's response to her attacker and He in turn playing her body as the fine instrument it is and thus forcing her response. So many of the submissions here in this category tend to be so similar but this one is a rare treat. Good work!

well written. made me wish someone would do that to me!!

That left me breathless.

The explicit detail, the raw human desire in it... truly a beautiful piece.

Bravo. You should be proud of yourself.