All Comments on 'Cheerleader Betrayed'

Good job creating a sympathetic victim. Too many of these stories have victims that are either bitchy or stupid (and in many cases both) so that when they get raped, the reader may not be turning cartwheels in celebration, but he/she probably isn't too sad about it. In this story, not only was the main character likable, she negated the "ditzy/slutty cheerleader" stereotype, she worked hard, and she had sense. I actually felt sad when I realized there would be no one coming to save her at the end. What saddens me the most is that this story is believable--I'm sure this kind of thing does go on in schools.

I enjoy a good N/C story, and this was one of the best. Hope I'll run into more of your work in the years to come!

Useless story