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this poem works rather well
and I'm surprised. It seems like so many literotica poems with its long list of choppy lines, though this poem doesn't read choppy. There are phrases that are so terribly cliche in most poems, but not bad in this one. You have some good, fresh images.
Breathtaking
This piece is intoxicating... really beautiful! ~Blue
beautiful ...
narrative.. poignant and lovely.
Very nicely done, bronzeage!
My favorite of your poems so far. The sentiment so real and shared by so many. The words chosen are beautifully erotic. I will read it over and over!
Beautifully written
Nice Imagery . . .
and an even nicer heart underlying those special word choices. Thanks. And you don't "owe" me anything. ;)
*****
Five.
lovely
Not much more to say other than the images and language rolled sweetly off my tongue. 5
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