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by Anonymous07/19/06

Name confusion

An ok tale, but got quite confusing right off the bat when you called her Tanya in one paragraph, then Ashley in the next.

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by Anonymous03/01/11

Try to make it less awkward

to read, that is. You're sentences are too polite to be talking about anything involving passion.

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