All Comments on 'Sharing Sister'

I Hope there will be a follow up, that was a HOT story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved it!

I loved this story. The idea of Kara catching her brother and his girlfriend in the act, in her bed, and then joining them is hot.

I did however, want to mention that I saw a few typos in here. It was nothing major for me, but proofreading may want to be better.

Thanks for the great story. Please continue this and tell us what happens next.

Very hot! Love the idea as well as how you brought it to life. Very good writing. I hope you'll make this the first in a series. At least a trilogy!

I thoroughly enjoyed it and wish you had done more chapters.

a little to unrealistic you expect us to believe that they don't get along but he dates one of best friends and is worryied she will tell his sis what they do but keeps dating her then you want us to believe that when she catches them fucking on her bed that he doesn't care and lets her join them no way keep it realistic and believable or put it in the fantacy area this is fiction and has to be believable and based on facts or in this case human nature which would keep him from dating one of her friends and also from letting her join them

Ass to pussy, bad idea...

The only way that could have been hotter is if they included ME !

Poorly written, not readily believeable (for fantasy to work, it has to have some sort of grounding in reality, this doesn't even touch the ground, it's just juvenile wank-fantasy) and not particularly sexy, just drivel. No stars.

The writing had a few problems but nothing to stop me from reading it was a nice story please keep writing I would like to see more maybe something leading to the three of them living together and maybe a kid or two from the girlfriend and sister

It must be my bad luck day, two stories now ruined by some jackass shoving his shit covered cock up the girls pussy. Fucking nasty! ...not to mention all the disease and health related issues, eww!!

Great story...not into the ass into the pussy thing, but a great story all the way.

Was this written by some sort of virgin? Having never had a girlfriend so never had the opportunity to do anal?

Going from her butt to pussy is just not done (ok, not done without a lot of preparation, despite what porn might make you believe), especially to someone you love or would want to carry on a relationship with.

And the typo's - some were understandable and some needed a little thought to see what was meant and should have been there instead. Read and then reread what you've written, then submit it to one of the proof readers/editors here to be tidied up. It isn't difficult and saves one comments pointing out the things you screwed up.

why moaning like a whore??? really....???

1 star:

like anoymous below, I agree

- why moaning like a whore??? really....???

- and first going into the ass without lube without prepartion and then in the pussy is a big NO NO...

So a good idee ruined by a 13 year old, great...

I started to give 5 stars, then had to only give 3....the story idea is excellent...sharing the sister like that, and maybe girlfriend's brother...

However...

1) Too many grammar errors, shifts in tense; definitely needs an editor to help with the final product;

2) Like others, the butt-to-vagina thing is NOT RIGHT...either you have no understanding of the health risks in this being an 'intentional' act and not accidental, or you really HAVE NO RESPECT FOR WOMEN, or yourself!! I understand getting caught up in the moment; that, however, should HAVE been reversed, giving time to at least prepare her butt for the razingit was gonna receive!! VERY INCONSIDERATE, AT LEAST!!

From ass to pussy without cleaning before and after anal?

Very sanitary.