All Comments on 'Twins Fall Hard'

Sounds like this really happened

THIS HAD TO REALLY HAPPEN

i really hate when writers start stories with " we never really got along growing up " or some such thing but they end up fucking like crazy. if you didn't get along growing up no much chance things will change as you grow up. usually if you don't get along then things never get better sometimes worse but not better. KEEP IT SOME WHAT REALISTIC AND BELIEVABLE PLEASE.

Athletics and Arts (athletics) (arts)

Sciences and Extracurricular actives (sciences and extracurricular activities)

Salutatorian (salutatorian)

History (history)

Biochemistry (biochemistry)

Governor (governor)

Law (law)

Med-School (medical school)

did all the sites (sights)

nurse's aid (nurses aide)

was still cover by (covered)

it's complete removal (its)

hinting (to) me

little (-more) harder

wrists of my chest (off)

kissed her with more fever (fervor)

layed down (laid)

hard as 'she' could (she)

I wanted (-her) to get her off first

We were rised (raised)

chanting about her G-spot {no G-spot in a woman’s ass. There is an A-spot that is the female equivalent of the prostate as it regards sensation.}

if this igit wanabe grammer police is so bothered by it STOP reading the stories or better yet volinteer to be an editer for people reading ur comments at the end of a good story just pissis me right off.

Good story, but please continue.it.