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by Anonymous

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by f-cynyr07/18/06

wow

that left me spent, and drained. i really enjoyed the ride, good strong images, and nice flow to the end.

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by vampiredust07/18/06

I want

I loved the pacy flow of this, great imagery. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

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by Anonymous07/18/06

HoTT...

and visual...2 nice combos..blue

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by My Erotic Trail07/18/06

I want...

what you said

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by Bill Dada07/24/06

...

Some powerful imagery. I especially liked:
"as gag reflexes pass
and full throttle
mutation flares again"
BD

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