All Comments on 'Sleepwalker! Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
keep this great story going

very sexual and fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot Damn!

...great stories, keep them cummin'!!!!

dirtyjoe69dirtyjoe69over 17 years ago
liked it

hot...hot...hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
incredible story

you're a great writer, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
YUM!

That was great! I'm so glad I discovered you and your writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
So Hot Great Read

Loved all three, really liked when Mom woke up and really got slutty with the son and aunt together. I had many dreams lying on my bed in which my Mom was the target of my affections. I could hit the wall behind my head sometimes.

Thanks for good scenario and good context, very enjoyable, very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
unbelievable

An incredible series of stories. I wonder what will happen next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

haveing read all 3 stories. gave you a5 for all of them , but disapointed that it ends with fucking the shit hole , spoiles the story

TJSkywindTJSkywindalmost 8 years ago
Hmm

In chapter 1 it was Ben, in chapter 3, it's Bobby. I guess in the two weeks between writing a few pages, it slipped by. Continuity errors do happen, but these chapters are pretty short. I say again, hmm.

Interesting premise with potential, but the writing was more on par with a simple wank story. Sleepwalking isn't that common, and very rarely are those able to have sex while in that state. Here it appears to have been a ruse for a lonely widow and her neglected sister. At the first opportunity, after banging Mom, he bangs his aunt. And no hint of bisexuality, but suddenly there it is. At this point, we expect the aunt to divorce and move in so they can continue having their three-ways. And those all have their attractions if done right in the presentation. A reluctant 4*

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great stories, I would like a follow up story if at all possible please. :)

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 2 years ago

Crash and burn boy toy.

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