All Comments on 'The Slumber Party Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
eh dont bother with a third chapter

eh dont bother with a third chapter

DumpingtonDumpingtonalmost 18 years ago
Wouldn't this make an AWESOME girl/girl video?!!

Although this story isn't very long the overall plot is incredibly erotic! I only wish this author was writing the script for a girl/girl video --- it would be EXCELLENT! I love the dominant/submission theme, I love how the "mistress" doesn't ignore the pretty rear ends of her pretty "slave girls," and I especially love the fun atmosphere of the setting. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
give me more!

This story is working up to a great climax... And so am I!

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