You have great story but you need to check your spelling you had he instead of her in part of the story. Pat Murray
Enjoyable story well written and fun to read. As for that other person's comment about a minor spelling error - I say picky -picky -picky.
I of all people shouldnt be saying this but finish i need to know what happens next.
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You have great story but you need to check your spelling you had he instead of her in part of the story.
Pat Murray
Good Read!
Enjoyable story well written and fun to read. As for that other person's comment about a minor spelling error - I say picky -picky -picky.
It cant end
I of all people shouldnt be saying this but finish i need to know what happens next.
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