Good story, but a bit improbable. In answer to anonymous, there will be no second part. It is the Lit.com fad, in many cases, to leave stories unfinished, or at least leave them with big questions unanswered so that "dear readers" can finish them in their own minds. I wonder why these authors bother to even write the incomplete story.
This is my story: "Once upon a time..." You can finish it.
Cheers!
(By the way, "Once upon a time..." is not copyrighted, so I am not plagarizing.)
Good story, but a bit improbable. In answer to anonymous, there will be no second part. It is the Lit.com fad, in many cases, to leave stories unfinished, or at least leave them with big questions unanswered so that "dear readers" can finish them in their own minds. I wonder why these authors bother to even write the incomplete story.
This is my story: "Once upon a time..." You can finish it.
Cheers!
(By the way, "Once upon a time..." is not copyrighted, so I am not plagarizing.)
John answers an interview and gets hired only to find he will be working for a boss who is female. Complications set in as he develops an uncontrollable lust for her. The Romance is saved by what else - Car Trouble. Gets steamy and hot very quickly. Enjoyable Read!
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Anonymous12/29/07
EDIT
You really need a good editor. There were periods in the strangest places!
by
Anonymous02/17/15
what happened??
Great story so for but what happened between them after?
Is there a sequel if not there should be. Its not nice to just leave us hanging.
English
Great Story
I hope you will write part two for this story
Will not happen!
Good story, but a bit improbable. In answer to anonymous, there will be no second part. It is the Lit.com fad, in many cases, to leave stories unfinished, or at least leave them with big questions unanswered so that "dear readers" can finish them in their own minds. I wonder why these authors bother to even write the incomplete story.
This is my story: "Once upon a time..." You can finish it.
Cheers!
(By the way, "Once upon a time..." is not copyrighted, so I am not plagarizing.)
Will not happen!
Good story, but a bit improbable. In answer to anonymous, there will be no second part. It is the Lit.com fad, in many cases, to leave stories unfinished, or at least leave them with big questions unanswered so that "dear readers" can finish them in their own minds. I wonder why these authors bother to even write the incomplete story.
This is my story: "Once upon a time..." You can finish it.
Cheers!
(By the way, "Once upon a time..." is not copyrighted, so I am not plagarizing.)
Office Romance!
John answers an interview and gets hired only to find he will be working for a boss who is female. Complications set in as he develops an uncontrollable lust for her. The Romance is saved by what else - Car Trouble. Gets steamy and hot very quickly. Enjoyable Read!
EDIT
You really need a good editor. There were periods in the strangest places!
what happened??
Great story so for but what happened between them after?
Is there a sequel if not there should be. Its not nice to just leave us hanging.
Ron Texas cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
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