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by WickedEve07/19/06

crumbs

I like minimalist poetry, and this isn't bad, but I think it actually needs to be fleshed out a tad more. :) And what about the crumbs? I can't figure out what they're all about.

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by vampiredust07/20/06

This

is rather nice, I liked the imagery here, esp in the first stanza but like WickedEve, am not too sure about 'catching crumbs'

I assume this is metaphorical and connects to the first stanza but can't be sure since it isn't made clear.

Still, a great read.

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by My Erotic Trail07/21/06

thunder struck

I like catching crumbs

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