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Very good poem and photo! I love that lone feather.
there is so much
to love and enjoy about this poem, but I especially appreciate the last verse. I agree with you 110%
xoxox
maria
falling.
Such an appropriate illustration - a fallen feather on a bed of green growth. "I want to see the end not fall head first into oblivion" is a beautiful line and so right for the accompanying image.
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Good mix in the illustration and your words. Just not my favorite tale, that of Icarus, and the way the legend's been used to chasten original thinking.
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Good mix in the illustration and your words. Just not my favorite tale, that of Icarus, and the way the legend's been used to chasten original thinking.
Loved it...
The last verse makes me think twice....are we talking about Icarus from Mythology, The son of Daedalus who, in escaping from Crete on artificial wings made for him by his father, flew so close to the sun that the wax with which his wings were fastened melted, and he fell into the Aegean Sea,
or "Icarus" An asteroid with an eccentric orbit that approaches close to the sun. re: Lost in oblivion.
found this on spinner
two of your poems in a row... this one soars
jth : )
OBLIVION IS NOT AND ENDING
OR A BEGINNING ONLY A CHALLENGE. tk u mlj lv nv
A nice take :)
I love the I-perspective in this - and the picture, of course.
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