Bachelor Party Surprise

why not close the business?

They can make way more selling her as a high-class call girl who will take on anyone bareback and they'll both have more fun.

Crap

This kind of shit happens every day. Not!

bullshit

i agree with the earlier poster, she's just a fucking whore already, why not add her to the menu and he is a sicko wimp pussy boy; neither give a damn about marriage vows and don't have a clue what love means

If you don't like it....

If you don't like it just move on... It is just fiction remember. It was a god story and left an opening for many more to follow.

Very hot

Really enjoyed the story. Loved the premise and husband's response to what happened. A little more editing to make it read a tad bit more smoothly wouldn't go amiss.

it show what people will do for money

sale wife,childred and moms for money or jerking off.what kind of man is he,asshole would be perfect.

Weak

Weak and shallow characters, fortunately she contracted aids and they will all be dead soon!

Simplictically erotic.

Might could have been developed a little bit more. But the simplicity created quite an erotic scene. Thank you for sharing. Texasreb1369

Not the nightly news!

I am amazed at the comments from people reading these stories! THESE ARE JUST STORIES! This is not the nightly news and real people doing real events - so get over your judgemental selves. Isn't this an erotic stories site? If you would rather read REAL articles just click on MSN and get your real world, everything is fucked up and people are killing each other NEWS! Otherwise, judge the story for what it is, a story! By the way, if you are not into LOVING WIVES stories, don't read them! Maybe you might like the Incest stories better!

Keep writing nighttimestories, it was pretty good, and I enjoyed it!

Sex happened too quickly

I liked the story alot. I do think it would have been better if the wife would have submitted to the sex because the touching pushed her over the edge. You kind of had some maniac run up and shove a dick in her.

It Was Hot Until The Wimp Got Jackingly Excited

He could have been called out by the hotel magmt., his car was stolen, fell and lost conscientiousness, got tied up, etc. -- but when you had him pathetically watching and jacking off encouraging her new cocksucking and fucking play the arousal for normal people went south as it should as pimping out wifiepoo is for fetish driven cucksters.

Decently written except for the sick male humiliation turn instituted by the writer - why? For the few pathetic male demeanment sicko's.

You can do better and for more readers.

good story

Good story, hope to see more of your stories here.

Just ignore the comments from people who doesn't seem to be able to differetiate fact from fiction. There are a lot of people who do enjoy stories like this, so keep on writing.

It seems there are a bunch of men with some serious relationship issues, who want any story in which a wife cheats to end with the wife getting murdered or punished in some form. Even in real life a lot of couples deal with cheating and learn to forgive and move on. Also, a lot of people have no problem with their partners having sex with other people. If this is not your cup of tea then don't do it. No one is forcing you to. And if you don't like even reading about it, then don't. Read something you like instead.

Need a wife like that

Pay no attention to the naysayers. It was a good story and one that could very possibly be true. I don't know but I liked it and think if I had a wife like that I would go into the business. Thanks.

Great!!

I loved your story please write lots more. A novella?

Jackingly Excited?

What does that mean?

What a guy!

It's one thing to willingly take on a room full of horny guys, it's another to get gang-raped - whilst your husband watches from the sidelines. I like your writing style, but this is plain nasty.

Good story

Very hot!

Got me HOT!!

I know it's a little unbelievable (as some have said, in varying degrees of nastiness), and I also know it's
just a story, not a description of actual events (as others have said) ... but none of that stopped it from
making me as hot as a firecracker, or from wishing I could have Kristy's job!! Seriously, except for the
unfortunate possibility of disease, I would LOVE to strip for and sexually service a room filled with horny
young men -- ESPECIALLY if my guy were there getting excited by it all while keeping me safe!! Sybil

Great Story!

Reminds me of Albatross' "Dancing Into Abandon," but shorter (and in some ways, sweeter). Good premise, nice characters, great pacing... handled the heat-of-the-moment transition pretty well. I'm impressed. Nice job.

I hate to rain on your little parade

But Christie just got screwed blued and tatooted. Every batchelor party have ever heard of is where the stripper does exactly that. She will simulate a blow job and special dance for the batch. Everyone else who fucks the stripper has to pay or the stripper has a bouncer with her that makes sure no hot cocked head littlepecker like the one who rammed Chrisy get in the mix. The couple might have had a lot invested in the party but fucking the wife was pure and simple a freebie. They didn't get jack shit...boy what loosers...i got a bridg

Bachelor Party Surprise

I have to say, I'm kind of disgusted with myself. This is an excellent story, and definitely arousing, but I find it kind of bad that I get aroused by this kind of thing, when I know in real life I'd be devestated and/or pissed off to an obscene extent. Regardless, that has nothing to do with the story really. Despite the fact that it was somewhat unbelievable, you wrote it well, and made it quite the erotic little fiction. I hope you continue to write, and that all of your other stories will be as sexy as this one was.

Not

In a fantasy kind of way, it was fun. Hated the ending though. Turning wives into sluts is about the biggest turn off that offends me in Literotica stories.

Mutual Consent

Its apparently okay for men to fuck lots of women, but not vice versa! Hubby was turned on, wife was turned on, what's wrong with this scenario? Nothing!!

Oh, and of course, its actually just a story!

Oh Come On

I know it's just a story, but a politician's son? Not in this world.

Wow!!!

This is my absolute favorite story. I love it! Is it a true story?

Follow-up

This is (in my humble opinion) the best story I have read. I love it.

How about a sequel as told by Kristi?

I would love to talk with Kristi or a girl like her about having sex in various situations. I happen to believe that two people who are attracted to one another should be free to enjoy each other's company without any nasty consequences.

What do you think?

Very sexy

Totally loved this story...keep up the good writing!

Sequel

You should definitely do a follow-up on this story. What about Kristy does another bachelor party or a birthday but Derek couldn't make it?

GREAT story! Please do a follow-up, and this next one could use a little more dirty talk :)

It only took reading half of the first page.

To realise the story would be unrealistic garbage so, at that point, I stopped reading, skipped to the end, and rated it 1*.

DWorncuck rated it a 1*

Probably worth reading since that idiot no longer has a working brain due to the amount of semen ingested.

Some party

On this site stories can have interesting plots and realistic characters or can be a straight forward - never-mind-the cliche stories that are merely a device to allow a sex scene take place. This falls into the latter catagorie which is fine but the writing isn't great - especially the dialogue.

True or False?

This is my favorite story. I have told it to several ladies just because I like it so much. It seems unbelievable and yet I want to believe it could be true.

Totally awesome story,

I would have squeezed them for a big tip, but man oh man, I would love a wife like that.

Hey, DickWornout ...

Personal preference on a story's content is exactly that: Personal preference. The fact that you openly admit jumping to the end and bombing the authors rating is exactly what's wrong with half the readership on this site. If you don't like the subject, please respect other readers who do enjoy it and move on. If you've got a necrophilia fetish and enjoy stories about sodomizing cadavers, I'm not going to trash the author of such stories because I'm not into that; I move on. If the author's work is chocked full of grammatical errors and mistakes in verb tense or something, then you have every right to inform him of those mistakes. Asserting wives partaking in group sex is wrong is more telling of your narrow-mindedness and lack of respect for others turn-ons.

Now, to the author, good story. And ignore these brainless morons who imply you can't write for shit.

nice story, four stars

my only issue with it, which explains the missing star, is the part where it changes from striptease to sex. The main problems, for me, are 'she tried to stand' and 'he held her down'. It's a little too close to a rape for me. Other than that, awesome story.

"Then, it happened way too quickly."

That's true. Striptease, nice and slow buildup... than you probably lost interest in it and began with fucking. What a pity. The build up was awesome.

A Cuck Is Born

'Nuff said!

Hot Wife!

Loved the story! Nice!!

BORING

Soooo nightime a quick question...

You had to go along with the quys fucking your
wife and she had to give then head to save you
happy house..?? would the house mean as much
to you if you were giving the blow jobs and getting
A$$ fucked..LOL Opppsie by by house..

WTF?

How about the hubby doing the girls at a batchlorette next time while wifey watches. If it was my wife I'd be out banging as much young pussy as I could.

fantastic

I very much enjoyed that, thanks

slut wife and her dumb assed cuckold

same O, same O

Great story

Great story, well written. Thanks

Nicely written for a very quick read. Would love to see bit more detail if you ever decide to revisit your story.

"Somehow the woman who had been taking her clothes off in the room full of men was not my wife she was a stripper and my mind did not register that was the case."

I'm sure his other dancers would be delighted to know that if they were being sexually assaulted, he'd just stand and watch it happen.

Attn Erotonaut

Perhaps you'd be better off reading a story before offering your comments. The author makes frequent reference to the multiple eye contacts between husband and wife and was, in fact, receiving frequent affirmations that his wife was enjoying herself. That the affirmations weren't verbal doesn't matter to those in a committed relationship (which I assume you've never had).

Good story

Very well written it was fun to read and very hot!! Write more!!

Pure fantasy! Wonderfully written and erotic. No need to worry about diseases and the need for condoms - save those concerns for rel life. I'm not sure any other story has turned me on this much before.

However, let me come to the defense of Erotonaut. Even written as a fantasy, this guy doesn't do the right thing. His initial comment as the guys were manhandling his wife tells us that he had no clue if his wife was ok with what was going on.

"As I handed Kristy her drink she looked at me with a wild eyed look that I could not tell if it was fear or excitement but her hand was still shaking."

Wouldn't it have been his job as the male help to say something to the customers to get them to take their hands off? Most strippers I've seen are look but don't touch and the guy accompanying them is there to fend the guys off when it gets out of hand. Unless, this was simply par for the course for their business. i dont get the sense that it was. Wouldn't it have been his job as her husband to find out if it was fear or excitement. I think the fantasy needed some clarity at that point, like an additional signal that she was ok with what was happening. Leaving it vague as the author did, makes him a bad husband. Sure, hindsight is 20/20 and she was into it. But at that point, he didn't know yet. For that matter, he didn't know if she was agreeable to being fucked vaginally until she starting blowing the other guy. She did initially resist. Did he assume that because she was waving her breasts in his face that she would be ok with his cock in her pussy. Just because someone is a stripper, doesn't mean they are ok with crossing the line into full blown sex. Just be ause she is getting turned on by the dance doesn't mean she would be ok with a gangbang. That is a big leap in reasoning even in a fantasy story. Again, insert a glance that clearly communicates her wishes to hubby. What if it had turned out that she didn't want things to to go that far? What if she was wanting and waiting for him to rescue her and she was essentially frozen in fear being raped by these guys? Yeah, even in a fantasy, he should have initiated a bit more effort to make sure she was willing to move forward. So I defend Erotonaut's comment. But in the end, it is one hot fantasy.

"I knew I should have gone to her rescue..." Or at least to clarify if she wanted to be rescued. A real man would have. I am fine with what consenting adults decide to do. However, please make sure all the participants are consenting instead of simply sitting back and hoping they are.

Fi e stars.