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Bachelor Party Surprise

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/27/13

In real life you are her pimp or her husband.

You boy are her pimp, you both fail as husband and wife, no marriage here.

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by OneShotOne05/16/13

I guess

pimping out your wife is one way to build the family business.

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by Anonymous06/13/13

All fun and games till she gets knocked up

then what will you guys do, keep her stripping as a preggo, after she has the kid, and she gets back to stripping, she will get knocked up again with someone else's kids, is that really what you want, your wife breeding with stranger's. They wont be your kids... and I guess you don't care as long as your getting off on her getting fucked and impregnated by strangers, to each their own, right

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by DSolo6106/29/13

Great fantasy

A great fantasy, well told. I'd love it if my wife would do this! More, please.

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by betrayedbylove07/11/13

Crap

Wimp sissy bullshit. All willing cucks should die.

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by Anonymous07/13/13

Are you guys serious??

Let me see...you dickheads read this story in "Loving Wives" which clearly states wives who are adventurous and play....and then you write comments about how much of a slut she is???? Are you serious? Shut your flaps. If you don't want to read about these fun loving women then choose another category! Once in awhile I may agree that the category may be wrong but come on....

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by Anonymous09/10/13

really

are you nuts or stupid. A babe for a wife and you are ok making her a whore.
no LW tale and all the STD out there. you are a chuck.

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by Anonymous09/11/13

love the slut wives

my wife comes home with her cunt full of cum and I get to enjoy it!!

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by Anonymous11/13/13

Girl of my dreams

For as long as I remember, I've dreamt about having a wife that would willingly participate in regular gangbangs with strangers. The more guys, the better! I often talk with my wife about my fantasy of watching her fuck a group of guys, seeing her suck and swallow load after load, seeing her pussy and ass dripping with cum. She gets unbelievably turned on by the notion and hints that one day it might happen. Hopefully, if that day comes, I'll be able to film the event to enjoy it for years to come. With any luck, she'll get hooked on gangbangs and work her way up to a 50 guy creampie gangbang! If your story is true, your a luck guy!

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by Anonymous11/21/13

My Wife got gang fucked by a group of niggers

And now she is knocked right the fuck up Royally. I don't mind so much as she is a real good looking bitch with a perfect 42-23-35 figure. Shit does happen and people fuck, its what we were made for. We don't know who the father is, so getting child support could be difficult. Oh well, that's how it goes.

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by Anonymous12/01/13

What a great .…..

... way for a cheating WHORE wife to take on as many cocks as possible while "Cucky" husband watches without a chance of kicking the slimy cunt wife to the corner ..….. talk about a "free pass" for the tramp!!

Cuck a doodle Cuck .. Asshole!!!

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by Anonymous01/08/14

hey

Write a sequel

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by Anonymous02/05/14

love cum on my wifes pussy

the guys who enjoy their wives getting fucked and coming home with their cunt full of cum are very lucky, I love when my wife does this and I get to lick her clean afterward the next step will be for me to suck their cocks as well

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by norcal6203/05/14

Amazing to see how many preachers read these stories.

It's the author's story. Comment on how it was written, not your judgment of the characters' actions.
My comment is about the writing; use contractions to have the language read the same as people actually speak.

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by Anonymous03/18/14

Call plagarism

Would have enjoyed this story more if I hadn't already read it verbatim years ago in Penthouse Letters.

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by Anonymous05/19/14

sequel soon please?

sequel soon please?

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by rixels06/27/14

Fairy Tale

Her husband won't have to worry about her having a tight pussy for very long. All of their family and friends would end up knowing that the wife was a whore and the husband was her pimp. Their kids would quickly learn the finer points of being humiliated in school and how to fight on the playground.

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by Anonymous07/10/14

Super story

I watch my now wife with a frien before we mere married. My date and I got it on while my wife fucker her bf. A year later we got together. I can't forget how she screwed my buddy. A year ago I gave her a hall pass and she fucked her former bf. When she got home that night I fucked her well fucked pussy and loved every minute. Start of something!

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by Anonymous10/11/14

Things can get out of control so quickly

I can remember over 30 years ago a bunch of us probably between 18-25 would go uptown every friday with the intention of tricking one or two sluts back to my house , telling them there would be plenty people there as it was someone we knew having a party it was amazing how quickly things would get out of hand sometimes we would,nt even get in the house and we would have them stripped and ready to be gang banged we very rarely went without.
My own wife Maria would go out with her friends to a different nightclub,so we knew we had to get rid of the slut before 3 am,anyway one night we took these 2 nineteen year olds real dolls with fantastic figures i remember ones name was Ann and she was just not having it she was married the other one Kathy was being shagged in the taxi and everybody had fucked her within an hour,we finally got this Ann into the room and she was fucking insatiable

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by Anonymous12/11/14

He's got nothing to lose. Anymore.

Open marriage? Wonder how she'll feel when its his turn to get laid? Whatever floats their boat. Just hope it does not end up sinking their marriage. Oh, that's right, they no longer have a marriage. He's technically her husband, but actually only one of her current and future cocks. Supposedly her favorite cock, for now, but how long will that last?

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by Anonymous12/19/14

It never ceases to amaze me how lame these cuckold stories are. What pathetic excuse of a man would actually get off on this crap?

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by Anonymous01/17/15

I LOVE THIS SHIT. YOU ARE FUCKING AWESOME

Fuck Steven King. Fuck all those other writers. You are the fucking best.
This story wasn't just hot. It was fucking red hot.

I beat off to this story 3 times in the last 15 minutes.
I fucking love this story. My cock is bleeding for the stimulation.
I don't even care about fucking any more. I just read your story and stroke my cock.

You are fucking awesome.

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by TheWarthog01/23/15

Awesome

Great story and telling. From nervousness to reluctance to submission of both husband and wife. Awesome.

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by wdbtchr02/07/15

Great story

As far as those who don't like stories like this I say don't read them if the subject upsets you, they turn me on even though I could never talk my wife into doing it.

If you've never witnessed people having sex in person, you just don't understand how you get pulled in and aroused in a situation like this. The only downside to live sex is that video just never seems the same for you. Having all you senses involved in sex makes it so much more intense, especially scent and taste. 8^)

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by cpig02/11/15

Perfect wife!

I wish she was mine!

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by andrewsixpack02/15/15

She's a keeper!

I loved the story, what a hot, sexy, beautiful little wife!! That's the kind of slut who keeps husbands like us happy! Good little fuck slut!

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by Anonymous03/01/15

I met my wife at a bachelor party

Got her number there. She too pulled a train. After we got married she continued to do guys at parties, come home and bang me silly.

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by Anonymous03/08/15

A "Keeper"??????

Noooooooooo ............ just another CHEATING WHORE WIFE...................

and a ......

Skank

and a Cum Dump

and a Piece of SHIT

and a Lying CUNT

..... and on .......... and on .......... and on .......

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by rightbank03/12/15

to those who say, if you don't like this don't read it, I ask

how do know it is going to be a cheating slut wife story before you read it?
are we a clairvoyant? A psychic? A seer? Or did you write this trash to deceive?

The story title is: bachelor-party-surprise.
Little did we know, that the surprise was on us. And, the reaction of the supposedly happily married husband to the infidelities of his wife, was an additional surprise.
And it was NOT a pleasant surprise.

Give me/us a break from your lectures. Ok, after the fact, we get it, you don't give a rat's ass about fidelity, monogamy, fidelity, or honour. For you it is OK for your spouse to pull trains, do gang bangs, spend hours sampling the wares of multiple partners.

Going into this saga of erotica we had a modicum of expectation. But your presentation was deliberately misrepresented.

And you now expect us to act the aggrieved party? Sorry, but that is not going to happen.

You lied to us. You told us a false tale. You are the deceiver.

Moving on.
to a different story,
and another author!

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by Anonymous03/20/15

You're kidding right?

It's one thing to do it once, but again and again. She'd be the biggest slut ever, and love couldn't last.

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by seekeraz03/21/15

Not a slippery slope... they jumped right off the cliff

but it couldn't have been too big a drop. After all they are in the bachelor party business so we know that they are going to be fast and loose with relationships and nascent relationships.

She'll be begging for more and he'll be enjoying it until she wants more than he (as her pimp) will be willing to concede. It's a sad story about two people who are unlikeable and certainly not sympathetic.

Now for those who think that comments should be reserved for checking grammar, spelling, and waxing eloquent about character development and story arcs- bunk. Reviews of literature, films, music, food, theatre, and art rarely focus on the technical aspects of the object of the review. That's why we have 8th grade teachers and entry level art and film criticism. Story and response to story and then the characters take center stage. It takes a lot of dam' gall to complain about those who react strongly to a theme or storyline because they don't agree with one's point of view. All points of view should be freely expressed. If you disagree, express your own point of view. Even better come up with a moniker by which you might be known and take responsibility. You're still anonymous but not lost in the sea of anonymous.

This probably belongs in Loving Wives and the tags give a clue or two but it would have been so much better to disclaim at the top of the story. I don't trust the tags that much myself a disclaimer at the top would have saved me the time I wasted on a third of the story before I quit. My bad. The ending was telegraphed and I guess i ignored it.

Earlier someone suggested a Loving Couples hub for stories that are actually about loving wives. If such a strategy were to be implemented the flames in this "loving" Wives hub would be for the most part quenched. I suspect that's the last thing Lauren wants.

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by frontlinecaster03/21/15

poor seekeraz

If only there were some way to tell what kind of story out was. Something like, oh, I don't know, the category it was in. That would be so useful.

The sooner you and your lot realize you don't belong here and the authors here clearly don't care about your moralistic ranting, the happier both sides will be.

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by Anonymous03/21/15

poor frontlinecaster

Poor fool believes any of us care what he thinks.

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by Anonymous07/21/15

questionable authorship

i've read this story on www.xhamster.com written by TCG

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by Anonymous07/21/15

@ questionable authorship

This story was posted on this site 9 years ago.

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by Anonymous08/02/15

Moralizers

Why do people who PRETEND to believe in monogamous marriages/relationships come to Literotica? Literotica is about SEX, people!
Good story though personally, I'd have had her get carried away with the future groom prior to having anyone assault her doggy style. Also, she went from being insatiable to exhausted in blink of an eye. Accepting the story theme, I would have had her accept the second Cummings of a couple guys and then be relieved to have a couple other dancers show up. (Kristi could have entered the party with a message to her husband that 3 more girls were on their way as soon as they could get there). AND I would not have had the husband jerk off; perhaps be amazed at his wife's wanton behavior and therefore tolerate it as a shocked observer.

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by Anonymous09/24/15

another pile of dung

willing cuckolds are not erotic. when will assholes like frontlinecaster admit that?

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by Goodhue10/03/15

She Provides the Dip For the Catered Food

Don't think I'd be touching any of the prepared food,especially the dips,if wife is also barebacking the guests! Don't want any cum doubling as dip,or pussy juice substituted for olive oil.And absolutely forget about going near the fudge brownies!
The sex is really hot and good motivation for slapping the monkey,but having the husband turn accepting cuck instantly is a bit too much. Spice could have been added by having him blow a gasket,tell her he's dumping her,and having her go after him and begging forgiveness ,but only after plenty more sucking and fucking.
Using her catering service sure gives the clients the option of "eating out" in two ways.

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by Cherrysburn10/06/15

Great story.

I don't know if I would be so cool if I was in a situation like that but I guess I'll never know. The story was good. I enjoyed it. It turned me on. Gave me some role play ideas.
P.s. to the haters. Shut the fuck up. It's a story, it's entertainment, are you not entertained? If not then you should be the one eating a dick. Anon ass holes.

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by Anonymous10/07/15

I just love the fact that the anons are........

making the cocksuckers howl like the babies they are.

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by Anonymous10/10/15

Its the unbelievable portrayal of a woman as mindless sex-starved fuckbot that's so repulsive.

This is entirely a man's fantasy, and is insulting to both women and men. And of course, the cuckold who hasn't the balls to stop things before they start. You apologize, you refund their money, and you take your wife the fuck home. Its not enjoyable when a male gives his wife away, essentially for money. She became a whore and he became her pimp. And you're a sick fuck if you enjoy seeing a married couple destroy themselves. Its only a matter of time before this relationship disintegrates.

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by Anonymous10/24/15

Not even a hooker would do this

Nine intoxicated clients at once? Bareback "full service" penetration?

Very unsafe work environment. Not even a professional escort would try something this risky; with AIDS and all the rest, penetration with no condoms can be suicidal in this day and age.

Adding more clients at some point makes each successive encounter much less pleasurable... at some point this is just overkill and no longer fun.

And no, a stripper is not a prostitute.

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by MunchDK02/21/16

Anonymous

Anyone reading the story knows this. That is why it is called fantasy.

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by MunchDK02/21/16

And no.

It is not just a man's fantasy.

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by Anonymous02/21/16

You sick SOB

Just wretched!

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by Anonymous02/22/16

So why the fuck did you dumb asses read it?

Everybody moaning about what a sick fuck for writing it he is, yet you read it. Crank it up a notch and write another.

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by Ib_Says03/20/16

It would be a nice if there was a warning that this was catering to the voyeuristic cuckold crowd.
It did absolutely nothing for me, except waste my time.

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by Anonymous03/21/16

loved it

Wow! Can't wait for more. Love the comments! Peoples it's fiction! Enjoy? You either love it or hate it! Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 10 stars = 100 %.

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by Anonymous04/01/16

Great story

All I can say is keep writing about your adventures. Being a cuckold myself I loved it.

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by BrendaNW05/09/16

so very hot

I just loved it .. I want to be her ..

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