by Selena_Kitt
Excellent work as usual SK. So much scope for where this story can go.
Selena, this was a great story, You know how to excite a man in your stories. please make a pt. 2
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Oh the places you can go and the things you can do with this one.Catholic school girls and porn! WOW. I'm on the edge of my seat in anticipation. Serve up Ch2, selena, I'm ready!
You're considered one of the best, SK.
Great work.. going to go jump my man now.
FtF
well done SK. You have again established your credentials as a superb erotic writer. Looking forward to your next story. Lance
the way she sets up each scene and teases the erotic thrill from every action is incredible. the stories flow and keep you aroused with tension building. can't wait for the next section
Selena, you've done it again ... great story beginning ... I can't wait for the next installment(s)
Matty Walter
Selena has set out to weave another riveting. lusty tale (like "Babysitting for the Baumgartners") that features a coming-of-age (legal) teen running the gamut of sexual pleasure and awakenings. I, too, shall be checking every day for the upcoming installments and see where this one goes. I have high expectations that we won't be disappointed. Thank you, Selena, for the articulate and intelligent story. Ken
Selena, keeping up the high standards again, bring on part 2.
Up4nething
SelenaKittyn,
Liked your story, however felt the sex was overdone just slightly. Sorry, but being older I prefer quality to quantity, having said that, some parts were truly erotic.
The theme is one I love, catholic girls, older men, priest, confessions, mother superior, and perhaps threesome and foursomes with the b/f making up the numbers. Oh! Can my old ticker take that much excitement I can’t wait to find out.
I will rush out to buy new batteries for my pacemaker while I await chapter two...
My very best wishes
Robert12
You have my gratitude. Excuse me while I load these soiled towels into the washing machine. ;)
Be still my heart...among other things!
You've given these two naughty girls hearts and souls!
Can't wait to see what else is under those short plaid skirts, white unbuttony blouses and knee socks.
You're going to keep me up waiitng for th enext chapter...and as long as I'm up, might as well read this again and again and again. <grin>
I am very glad to get reacquainted with your work.
Top notch!
You're awesome. As usual. Phew!
I know how this series turned out, cos I read it in reverse order. That doesn't detract from the intensity of this first chapter.
I am so looking forward to reading the remaining chapters in the series.
Hotter'n Hades, Selena.
Simply amazing. This story is both intense and sexy without any of the main characters ever touching each other... I love it!
There are a lot of possibilities here. You started off well. Please let your imagination run wild.
Wow, this is the first story of yours I've read, and I can't tell you how excited I am that there's so many more...this was perfect in every way, exactly what I needed tonight
You're a very entertaining writer. You know exactly how much detail to include without overloading the reader with information, and have a talent for weaving a thrilling tale. I like your writing 'voice'. It works well. Nicely done. :0)
So, so good! Perfectly paced and so realistic! While reading it, I remembered a similar experience spending the night at a good friend's house in high school. I hadn't thought of that in years! This story brought it all back, which was fun. I will be reading the rest of the series!
Thanks for this and the rest of the series - your writing is great - sexy without being coarse, easy to read without being dumbed down. I really enjoyed the stor(y) and loved the characters. Excellent - I will read some more of your work when I get time. Thanks once again.
A very arousing coming-of age story that captures all of the hesitancy and eagerness of the girls on their way into sexual maturity.
Very impressive.
I recently deleted my collection of porn stories.
Came back for the most erotic story that I had ever read and was not disappointed.
I'm finding that older stories to be much better than newer ones. So glad I found this very hot one.