Ujay's Story

Good Start

I really enjoyed your story. I happen to like older men myself. You might want to use a beta in the future though. Nothing major, just need to work on the punctuation more. Anyway, i liked it and look forward to reading more.

Satisfying

Thanks for the story.
It had a nice flow and some complication to it, usually missing in stories written by the young ones.
Maybe we need a real mature section just for the mature writers and the readers that like the slower, surer, more satisfying pace and plot.
Keep it up.
Wise eyes, a discerning imagination and a practiced hand makes for good stories.

Thanks

I truely enjoyed your story

This story is awesome!

And the last line just about destroyed me. Fabulous story!

A simple story

Enjoy your stories, this one is a little different but entertaining as always

I like the idea of this story. One does not often think of the love lives of the true ancients.