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by Sachs07/25/06

Perfection.

You've captured the narrator's confusion and uncertainty perfectly. The scene where he watched Trent was really hot, as was the one with the Ranger. I like how gentle the Ranger was and how he made sure the guy wanted it instead of plowing ahead. Too often there are stories where the guy's first time is not only painful but their partner is also incredibly derogatory and then the virgin comes out of it thinking that it was ok to be treated like that (sorry, it's a pet peeve of mine). Anyway, this was perfect. Suitably awkward for someone's first time, sexy, well-written and editted. I hope that you're going to continue this story. I'd love to see what happens with Trent (although if he has a bf it may be a bit of trouble).
Cheers, Sachs.

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