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Forbidden Ch. 02

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by Anonymous07/26/06

Wanting More...

I love this story, it is well writen, and a lot of thought appears to be had. The end of the second chapter, leaves me wanting more, wanting to know what happened...so I sit here and wait for the next chapter...impatiently!

-Spirit W.

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