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very hot
I love the way you write. You have a great imagination, but very erotic also.
Keep it coming
Good Story keep it coming cant wait for the next chapter...
Cock tease
The title says it all, tease, write faster!
Good reading! Very, very erotic!
Very erotic! I am "stiff" and naked, anticipating the next chapter.
We could all use a few poolside sex lessons....
And if it has to be from step-mom....sweet
Anxiously awaiting more,
I can't wait for the lessons to continue!
I'm really enjoying this!
Please hurry with more!
Great job!
erotic trail
I am enjoying your tale (~_~) on a not so rainy night
beginning of an author
you have a good imagination. however, you need to learn a lot more about grammer, punctuation, spelling and sentence structure. read your stories several days after you write them so that you can correct some of the mistakes.
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