by Satin and Lace
I love the way you write. You have a great imagination, but very erotic also.
Good Story keep it coming cant wait for the next chapter...
Very erotic! I am "stiff" and naked, anticipating the next chapter.
And if it has to be from step-mom....sweet
Anxiously awaiting more,
I'm really enjoying this!
Please hurry with more!
Great job!
you have a good imagination. however, you need to learn a lot more about grammer, punctuation, spelling and sentence structure. read your stories several days after you write them so that you can correct some of the mistakes.