All Comments on 'Under Mr. Nolan's Bed Ch. 03'

I've heard of partners in Crime; but, your two main characters are really...well - just hilarious. I loved their sexual antics to death. You so captured that particular sin vs forgiveness thing perfectly. Loved it!

I don't read series stories very often but I LOVE this one!

how do you manage to do this consistently. You put out a story line that is well thought out, believable and written with an intensity that just keeps your fans coming back for more. I am very impressed Selena, I just wish I had the ability to write the way you do, and hate you for making it seem so easy, when in reality, it's a bitch. Kudos (the chocolate kind).

I reviewed it, SK- nanananana

FtF

Selena the porn writing goddess extraordinaire, taking us down a hot and perverted path at her own pace, tease and spice and then BAM, like Emeril, it gets REALLY HOT! I LOVE THIS SERIES! Keep going, girl. For you, my cum is like doritos-I'll just make more!

one of the stiffest hard ohs ever!

Is amusing though that you and your keybored clan never miss one stroke even when the Name God comes up in a story bringing to light the question all will answer for perverted things.

Such a jaded ilk.....

The feedback is more interesting in dimension as usual than the story.

I love the interplay between Leah and Erica. They are hot characters Selena. Look forward to their next adventure.

Lance

I am not usually a fan of chapter stories because I am not usually able to follow each chapter and end up mising some of the chapters. But with this story I have followed and anticipate each new chapter. Very well done!!!

I loved how you worked the characters slowly up to the sex. Can't wait to see the next chapter

Great build up... Got me all hot and bothered now...

You have kept the great pace and excitement through three chapters! I'm loving it!

The erotic build up between chapters is so well done... luring this reader to crave more and more!

Awesome to read. So exquisite it took me bad to my first exploration with my girlfriend when we were at school.

I can read this story any time and be turned on by it.

This was a real turn on, interesting to think about two girls discovering this side to them, thanks for writing.