Very good flow of the story, not a lot of meaningless build up. yet to the point and with good execution. Looking forward to more tales of this brother and sister!
So few out there that are good, and have a real point to them.
The drawn out stories are boring, yours, got me interested quick.
You need to write more.
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Anonymous07/26/06
well written
please write more tales of this sexy sibling duo.
by
Anonymous07/27/06
why not?
if i had a sister who was willing, i would have fucked her at every opportunity. the only reason not to is to be sure no chjildren come out of the relationship. certainly no warning in any out of date scince fiction yarb should stop two people who really understand eack other.
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Anonymous07/27/06
sweet!!
she sounds like a sweet lookin' girl. keep going!!
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Anonymous07/31/06
nice
enjoyed your story - keep telling us more about this
English
Awesome tale
Very good flow of the story, not a lot of meaningless build up. yet to the point and with good execution. Looking forward to more tales of this brother and sister!
Nice one
So few out there that are good, and have a real point to them.
The drawn out stories are boring, yours, got me interested quick.
You need to write more.
well written
please write more tales of this sexy sibling duo.
why not?
if i had a sister who was willing, i would have fucked her at every opportunity. the only reason not to is to be sure no chjildren come out of the relationship. certainly no warning in any out of date scince fiction yarb should stop two people who really understand eack other.
sweet!!
she sounds like a sweet lookin' girl. keep going!!
nice
enjoyed your story - keep telling us more about this
T.
Wonderful
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