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a mental doodle in the margins

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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust07/23/06

Clever

I enjoyed this smart little write. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by Maria239407/24/06

:)

like your reference to one of the fathers of psychology. And what the rest of the poem means. I love poetry that causes me to think harder

enjoyed this one

maria

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by LeBroz12/15/06

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And play we shall
With verse like this
And words with many meanings.

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by duddle14612/19/06

solution.

Work hard ~ play hard ~ live life fully.

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by Amyfriend02/12/07

They say that we should play..

because laughter nurtures the mind and body.

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