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Brilliant!
I absolutely loved it!!!! Dylan can punish me any day
Noooo
please hurry with the next chapter. this is such a great story.
write more i guess
you should really write another chapter it's a good story i liked it
Want More!
Want more!!
or u trying to kill me
PLEASEEEEEEEEEE DONT LEAVE ME IN SUSPENCE FINISH UR STORY PLEASE, I NEED TO SEE MORE.
A few more chapters
Loved it, needes an end, just not to fast. At least a couple more chapters
I've fallen in love
I've fallen in love with your characters. I keep imagining catherine and heathcliff, had they been able to truly fall in love. Please, continue the story! I want the fairy tale romance they both deserve... and the hot sex to go along with it!!
love it!
This is my favorite story here...it really needs an ending though. You have such an amazing writing ability!
what next?
very good so far I just wish that you would finish it.
MORE
Please? What happens next? This is such an amazing story. Don't let it end here!
Hello!
This is amazing! But it needs to be finished. Where is the ending? Oh plzzzz
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