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An Innocent Ch. 03

bypyrokat©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/27/06

Brilliant!

I absolutely loved it!!!! Dylan can punish me any day

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by Anonymous07/28/06

Noooo

please hurry with the next chapter. this is such a great story.

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by Anonymous07/30/06

write more i guess

you should really write another chapter it's a good story i liked it

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by Anonymous08/02/06

Want More!

Want more!!

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by Anonymous08/28/06

or u trying to kill me

PLEASEEEEEEEEEE DONT LEAVE ME IN SUSPENCE FINISH UR STORY PLEASE, I NEED TO SEE MORE.

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by Charcoaler09/16/06

A few more chapters

Loved it, needes an end, just not to fast. At least a couple more chapters

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by Anonymous02/22/07

I've fallen in love

I've fallen in love with your characters. I keep imagining catherine and heathcliff, had they been able to truly fall in love. Please, continue the story! I want the fairy tale romance they both deserve... and the hot sex to go along with it!!

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by Anonymous04/11/07

love it!

This is my favorite story here...it really needs an ending though. You have such an amazing writing ability!

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by Anonymous07/10/07

what next?

very good so far I just wish that you would finish it.

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by Anonymous12/15/08

MORE

Please? What happens next? This is such an amazing story. Don't let it end here!

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by Anonymous12/18/08

Hello!

This is amazing! But it needs to be finished. Where is the ending? Oh plzzzz

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