All Comments on 'Once You Had Black...'

GREAT STORY, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT

If you were such a great lover, the woman would be in such ecstasy, that she wouldn't be able to talk, let alone drone on and on like the woman in your story. Nice little fantasy to stroke your ego, but pure BS!

Your ability isn't the issue it is the subject of white demeanment you carelessly put in the path of acceptance of your work. For what real purpose?

You attempt to explain it away as retributionby a younger man but then throw it in our face in an attempt at arousing us??? You narrow your audience to the male sicko's into sub male demeanment. Very few for your time and effort.

Find another theme without the sick fetish type wimps for a challenge to write credibly without the normal sick crutches of weak writers.