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unsettling
I dislike such a senario but understand the feelings
Ouch
Kinda bites you. I loved the ending. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews
Chilling
A dark visceral ride in some tight writing. Very nice. This poem goes on my favorites.
A lot of powerful emotion in a few words.
The very tightness of the poem is what makes it so strong. Almost too vivid!
Thanks, DJ
dark power!
definatley "fav" material!
Wow
And here's another reason to love your writing babe. Not only are you a wonderful writer but you make poetry so deep, so intense that it's impossible not to stop and ponder on what was written.
Well done Rora, very well done :)
Nice work
some good images, but the last stanza is far and away the best.
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Not being politically correct, the simplest way I can say it is,
Inside the mind of a fruitcake.
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