Absolutely lovely story!! I've always had fantasies about being taken by amazons...and you hit right on the spot. In fact I read your other stories and all of them are magnificent. Almost no toys and more cunnilingus, which is the way sapphic love should be. You are starting to become one of my favorite writers.
Loved it. I totally admire someone who is either super smart or does their homework so thoroughly and you come across through your story as a genius, making me green with envy over your intelligence and writing ability. I love the pictures you paint with your words, and the detail, along with the eroticism. Very nice job. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Anonymous12/20/09
Amazing
You are amazing at writing these kinds of stories. I love the fantasy of having an beautiful, hot, horny amazoness capture me, lick me and make me cum. Keep up the great work!
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Anonymous05/14/13
Loved the first half :)
I appreciate how you brought in the storm description. I also liked that you gave a great representation of the ancient 'map' and the current one in order to give a more vivid and perhaps accurate image.
Once the ceremonies commence, it just switches to too gratuitous for me. I love, love, love, the concept of the girl publicly licking the Queen, but between the Queen's assets, the crude language, and the girl being SO willing... It just lost its shimmer for me.
I still read it all the way of course, and did enjoy it regardless of its switch in focus. I am glad that the entire assembly licked her rather than penetrated her as that would be the icing on the cake to have a virgin taken by 'that' many people -literally- in a row.
Nicest introduction to Amazons that I think I've ever read.
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Beautiful
Absolutely lovely story!! I've always had fantasies about being taken by amazons...and you hit right on the spot. In fact I read your other stories and all of them are magnificent. Almost no toys and more cunnilingus, which is the way sapphic love should be. You are starting to become one of my favorite writers.
You're very gifted
Loved it. I totally admire someone who is either super smart or does their homework so thoroughly and you come across through your story as a genius, making me green with envy over your intelligence and writing ability. I love the pictures you paint with your words, and the detail, along with the eroticism. Very nice job. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Amazing
You are amazing at writing these kinds of stories. I love the fantasy of having an beautiful, hot, horny amazoness capture me, lick me and make me cum. Keep up the great work!
Loved the first half :)
I appreciate how you brought in the storm description. I also liked that you gave a great representation of the ancient 'map' and the current one in order to give a more vivid and perhaps accurate image.
Once the ceremonies commence, it just switches to too gratuitous for me. I love, love, love, the concept of the girl publicly licking the Queen, but between the Queen's assets, the crude language, and the girl being SO willing... It just lost its shimmer for me.
I still read it all the way of course, and did enjoy it regardless of its switch in focus. I am glad that the entire assembly licked her rather than penetrated her as that would be the icing on the cake to have a virgin taken by 'that' many people -literally- in a row.
Nicest introduction to Amazons that I think I've ever read.
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