by dirtyjoe69
One hot voice?? Jesus what's the rush in telling the story? Do you do speed reading as a past-time or what? Your voice is far from sexy or hot and your acting skills wouldn't even get you a part in a badly dubbed porno!!
This is being read way too fast by someone who has no sexuality at all. Not good at all. Almost sounds like she (it is a she, right?) is trying to read this in record time like a bad commercial for used cars.
You forgot to say "if it doesnt say micro-machines, it's not the real thing". Slow it down.
What a joke one sexy voice, i don't think so. Read way too fast.No feeling. Just bad.
This was truly terrible -- or at least the first minute was, which is all I could take. I wanted to stop after about 5 seconds, but hung in there because I couldn't believe how badly this was READ. It was like staring at a car wreck. Actually, a car wreck would have been sexier.
The other reviewers are pretty harsh, but yes the reading is without passion or authenticity. It got better toward the end. I suggest the reader just make something up and ad-lib rather than read the "giant cock" garbage in the script. The reader's voice could be sexy if she would just slow down and use words she is comfortable with, and can "get in to the character".
First of all she doesnt have a hot voice and second that just plain sucked. I didnt even get slightly turned on!
Sorry guys and gals it was our first attempt we will try to do better next time. In fact I believe we did on Sweet Sweet Taboo and Just Sex. The audio thing is new for us and we are trying to work out the kinks between read material and keeping it believable. Once again I appologize for the story.
damn that fucking sucked. i reallyy like how the reader cleared her throat in the middle. it was not hot at all. you could tell she was reading it. it plain fucking sucked
If this was a FIRST TIME attempt at audio - I'd say hang in there. Don't get put off by the mob - baying for your blood. Your BASIC VOICE IS SEXY.. its just the modulation and timing which needs some working on - YOU DO THE ACTION PARTS quite OK when you ad lib actually!! Maybe if you play with yourself a bit...??? People complaining about voice quality should also remember that these audios are done in ONE TAKE with no splicing which is used for the PORNFLICKS they are OBVIOUSLY benchmarking these against!! JUST HAVE FUN and keep COMING!!
IM ONLY GIVING YOU A 100% BECAUSE I LOVED IT
I DIDNT LOVE IT BECAUSE IT WAS GOOD, I LOVE IT BECAUSE THIS WAS ONCE AGAIN PURE SHIT DONE BY YOU!!!1! AND THIS IS AS USUAL
DO YOU HAVE NO SELF SHAME? GET OFF THIS SITE. YOU FUCKING SUCK AND SO DOES YOUR FAT BITCH FRIEND. KTHXBYE.
didnt sound real at all,hilariously bad.
Also you sound like a man, No, a pre-op tranny
Oh ya baby I love to fuck you ass and pussy.
Please tel me can I fuck your ass and pussy.
Kul KULLA KHAN
.............that was truly horrible........you have the right voice for it, but your tone, pitch...everything was off. if you really want to do this, then work on it. but damn....practice, make it sound like you are actually having sex, that's the point of audio.....either way, work on it...
...BUT agreed with the other comments re the lack of feeling, read out way TOO fast, etc
sorry but she's needs some acting training or to feel less self-conscious. believe it or not there IS an art to audio work.
The sounds on Just sex were good. Stick to that as the orgasm from lady sounded real enough. Keep Joe from talking though... he sounds like a wimp.
Lady- don't read anymore. Just bend over and let your real sounds come out as those are good and sexy (especially when you grunt ike an animal).
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One word: pacing.
This was a barrage. Here's the first line: Oh ya baby I love when you lick my tits like that. Say what? You want to do what? Oh of course you can do that! Sure go for it. Stick your fingers in my snatch. Can you feel how wet I am already? My sweet juices running down your fingers! Why don't you take them out and taste me!
Realistically, this would be spaced over several minutes (even accounting for the fact that we don't get the other half of the conversation. Take a breath!), not 10 seconds. Have a look at this edit:
Oh ya baby I love when you lick my tits like that (Moan).
"Say what?"/"You want to do what?" (make it simpler by only having one of these lines. They are serving the same purpose anyway)
"Oh, of course you can do that!"/"Sure go for it." (only have one of these, there's no need to say both, as that implies that your male participant goes something like "wait, are you sure?" in between, which would have been fine if she was the one to suggest the fingering, but she wasn't.) Stick your fingers in my snatch. (more moaning) Can you feel how wet I am already, my sweet juices running down your fingers? (she's being more dominant here, so have her lines to reflect that if that was your intention). Take them out and taste me!
You need an editor/proofreader and discuss the line with whomever you have read them, some of this didn't feel like it came natural to her and dirty talk for the sake of talking dirty is not sexy. It not only has to sound hot, it has to sound natural.