by noctum_aeternum
The detailed descriptions of your story sent me over the edge...I absolutely loved it, more please
That was the best Vampire story that I have so far read. A pleasing great seduction with the vampire himself. Couldn't have done better myself. Next please . . . Please let me know when you right another vampire story. I'll gladly read them.
too predictable too common .....what if in his throes of orgasm she changed into something that gobbled him up sucking him into her pussy as it devoured him ???? Now that would have been interesting !!!!!!! And it would have given an entirely different meaning to the title ...........MMMWwwaaahahahahahahahaha ....that is the real reason that Vampyres are a vanishing breed .......they are getting hard to find .
Stephen ...the thruholewizard
Try to get a proofreader. The spelling and grammar errors kept taking my mind off the story.