All Comments on 'A Chance Encounter'

by noctum_aeternum

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Regan24Regan24over 17 years ago
Deadly Seduction

The detailed descriptions of your story sent me over the edge...I absolutely loved it, more please

maxex5452maxex5452over 16 years ago
Wow . . . Amazing

That was the best Vampire story that I have so far read. A pleasing great seduction with the vampire himself. Couldn't have done better myself. Next please . . . Please let me know when you right another vampire story. I'll gladly read them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
a TWIST would have been nice

too predictable too common .....what if in his throes of orgasm she changed into something that gobbled him up sucking him into her pussy as it devoured him ???? Now that would have been interesting !!!!!!! And it would have given an entirely different meaning to the title ...........MMMWwwaaahahahahahahahaha ....that is the real reason that Vampyres are a vanishing breed .......they are getting hard to find .

Stephen ...the thruholewizard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
yeah

It was too predictable but still nice

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Need proofreader!!

Try to get a proofreader. The spelling and grammar errors kept taking my mind off the story.

Anonymous
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