if a story is interesting enough for me to read it to the end, I'll give it a five. That's what happened here. The 75% rating above is just because it's not among the best stories I've read to the end.
It's an interesting twist, thanks for taking the time to write and post it.
I liked the start of this series. I am sure you will give us more for the future. The husband deserves this from his wife if he ignored her for over an hour at a party. She is still a cheating slut, but the world needs those too. Though I have to agree with hubby in that looking at big tits is a fun endeavor he should have been more discreet like I am.
I look forward to you completing the tale of her affairs and also how the author and her got it on.
A fan of JPB always (not all endings admittedly, but a fan none the less).
Charleybear
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Anonymous07/27/06
love the stories
your stories ether get me horny or make me laugh and some piss me off but when it comes down to it they are all good stories.
keep it up ignore the nay sayers and keep on writting.
mike
I liked the story and didn't like the story. There was too much alphabet and not enough A to Z in why the woman got into the situation. I could care less hubby was wagged on some hooters as her seduction was what was erotic. Ushering her out of the house was boring.
Premise was interesting but the story was too vague.
She should have kept fucking those other guys and let one of them knock her up, just out of revenge for Harry watching those other women's tits and ignoring her.
Debbie is a spiteful little tramp in the part where Deb is telling her story about the party and when she over heard the guys talking about the girls with big hooters well did she ever think that they knew she would be listening to there conversation and they were making it all up to see what she would do?
Atlanta,Ga
English
The way I see it,
if a story is interesting enough for me to read it to the end, I'll give it a five. That's what happened here. The 75% rating above is just because it's not among the best stories I've read to the end.
It's an interesting twist, thanks for taking the time to write and post it.
Hey Bob
I liked the start of this series. I am sure you will give us more for the future. The husband deserves this from his wife if he ignored her for over an hour at a party. She is still a cheating slut, but the world needs those too. Though I have to agree with hubby in that looking at big tits is a fun endeavor he should have been more discreet like I am.
I look forward to you completing the tale of her affairs and also how the author and her got it on.
A fan of JPB always (not all endings admittedly, but a fan none the less).
Charleybear
love the stories
your stories ether get me horny or make me laugh and some piss me off but when it comes down to it they are all good stories.
keep it up ignore the nay sayers and keep on writting.
mike
You're on a roll!
Go for it, Bob! You're on a roll, man!
Loved the story, I'll be looking for the next chapter.
so so
I liked the story and didn't like the story. There was too much alphabet and not enough A to Z in why the woman got into the situation. I could care less hubby was wagged on some hooters as her seduction was what was erotic. Ushering her out of the house was boring.
Premise was interesting but the story was too vague.
Good reading!
She should have kept fucking those other guys and let one of them knock her up, just out of revenge for Harry watching those other women's tits and ignoring her.
Debbi the waitress
Debbie is a spiteful little tramp in the part where Deb is telling her story about the party and when she over heard the guys talking about the girls with big hooters well did she ever think that they knew she would be listening to there conversation and they were making it all up to see what she would do?
Atlanta,Ga
That is cute
And Sexy.
Short And Sweet!!
Thanks for sharing.
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