It received a 25 as it was short so it didn't last long enough to be boring, but besides the other comment of inconistency there is the point of a woman so worried no one knows her and by count 8 wretches know she is a slut which means hundreds of pervs in her town know what an easy lay she is.
Why not just have her mythical self post her picture to all of your fans as by God apparently people aren't going to be good, but only if they choose to be good with His help.
Catharsis online instead of confessional, now that would have made a good catholic girl an interesting mass....and a better story.
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Continuity
In part one she had never taken it in the rear. Now you tell us she had three at once. Excellent story otherwise.
By God
It received a 25 as it was short so it didn't last long enough to be boring, but besides the other comment of inconistency there is the point of a woman so worried no one knows her and by count 8 wretches know she is a slut which means hundreds of pervs in her town know what an easy lay she is.
Why not just have her mythical self post her picture to all of your fans as by God apparently people aren't going to be good, but only if they choose to be good with His help.
Catharsis online instead of confessional, now that would have made a good catholic girl an interesting mass....and a better story.
Small error here
In Part 1 Debbie says that she had never had anal sex before and finally wanted to try it. Chapter 3 she has anal as part of a three-way.
It could have been 5*****s.
However, because of the airtight (anal), I downgraded it from 5 to 2 stars.
Thanks
For the read.
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