Anonymous, do you find it hard to breathe, with your head shoved up your ass and all?
Dude, if you didn't read it, you shouldn't rate it. Or comment on it.
JPB, other than the continuity error in chapter 3, you wrote a pleasurable little story. The only reason I didn't rate it higher was that it was a *little* story, and could have been fleshed out a lot more. Thanks anyhow.
50 on this one as 3 times unfaithful to a woman is actually 4 times when you include one guy from a previous bang which turns into 7 pervs.
Frankly, I don't know one adult male in dozens who would stick their dick into a woman with 6 other strangers. Yet the stories always have willing idiots doing it.
At least you touched on the fact that mass sex is a psychopathy and that you are nothing special as if you weren't being used by her someone else would be chosen.
It was though a very mediocre, but better than your other 3 posts which states how bad they were.
Honestly Bob, not being smart, I hope you are ok, because if you aren't deliberately writing things wrong then maybe you need a long break fishing or doing something normal.
Fuck you. I don't need a queer asshole like you to tell me anything. I read, or not read, what I choose. I comment, or not comment, when I choose. You are a low-life sick motherfucker just like bobee. You and your opinions are as worthless to me as you are. Fuck you.
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Anonymous10/22/09
Great fun and innovative
I loved every chapter. Probably not very realistic, but so what. It was fun to read and fun to see something creative and different.
I don't know when this was written (too lazy to look it up), but it's obvious that many of JPB's ardent "fans" are today's deranged teabaggers. They always have hated everything.
JPB, SOME FACTS WERE OVERLOOKED FRO C2 TO C4 IN REGARDS TO ANAL. SEEMS LIKE THE LITTLE LADY LIED ABOUT HERE 1ST TIME. NOT LIKE YOU TO MISS A FACT. STORY WAS GOOD IN ITS ENTIRETY. TK U MLJ LV NV PS 1 STAR DEDUCT ON C4,
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Bullshit
I didn't waste my time reading it and I won't waste my time commenting on it. Other than this brief comment.
huh?
Anonymous, do you find it hard to breathe, with your head shoved up your ass and all?
Dude, if you didn't read it, you shouldn't rate it. Or comment on it.
JPB, other than the continuity error in chapter 3, you wrote a pleasurable little story. The only reason I didn't rate it higher was that it was a *little* story, and could have been fleshed out a lot more. Thanks anyhow.
Makes sense as a woman
50 on this one as 3 times unfaithful to a woman is actually 4 times when you include one guy from a previous bang which turns into 7 pervs.
Frankly, I don't know one adult male in dozens who would stick their dick into a woman with 6 other strangers. Yet the stories always have willing idiots doing it.
At least you touched on the fact that mass sex is a psychopathy and that you are nothing special as if you weren't being used by her someone else would be chosen.
It was though a very mediocre, but better than your other 3 posts which states how bad they were.
Honestly Bob, not being smart, I hope you are ok, because if you aren't deliberately writing things wrong then maybe you need a long break fishing or doing something normal.
Response to 'huh?'
Fuck you. I don't need a queer asshole like you to tell me anything. I read, or not read, what I choose. I comment, or not comment, when I choose. You are a low-life sick motherfucker just like bobee. You and your opinions are as worthless to me as you are. Fuck you.
Great fun and innovative
I loved every chapter. Probably not very realistic, but so what. It was fun to read and fun to see something creative and different.
I don't know when this was written (too lazy to look it up), but it's obvious that many of JPB's ardent "fans" are today's deranged teabaggers. They always have hated everything.
Love your stories, JPB.
AN OVERSIGHT
JPB, SOME FACTS WERE OVERLOOKED FRO C2 TO C4 IN REGARDS TO ANAL. SEEMS LIKE THE LITTLE LADY LIED ABOUT HERE 1ST TIME. NOT LIKE YOU TO MISS A FACT. STORY WAS GOOD IN ITS ENTIRETY. TK U MLJ LV NV PS 1 STAR DEDUCT ON C4,
5 guys is too many.
That but mostly because of the anal, I downgraded it to 1*.
Nothing New.
Thanks for sharing.
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