Nice, short, and hot. And it can work for both sexes. Well done.
You write very well. I was laughing through the whole story. I like how you wrote it from what one person said. It worked well. Thanks for writing this.
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Excellent work
Nice, short, and hot. And it can work for both sexes. Well done.
Very funy
You write very well. I was laughing through the whole story. I like how you wrote it from what one person said. It worked well. Thanks for writing this.
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