I use to check Literotica once a week for new stories. I now find myself checking every day to see if you have posted another chapter. Its not just the story line its the way you tell it. I really enjoy how you write! I loved the line "It felt like Carol and I were breathing from the same lungs, thinking with the same mind." I know many of us have experienced that feeling ... and it is so intense. Looking forward hopefully to many more chapters. Thanks
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Anonymous07/31/06
these stories are truly wonderful, but ...
...they're not getting submitted fast enough to maintain the heat between episodes, and the chapters aren't long enough to get off to. :( given the delicious quality of your writing, that's tragic.
is there any way you can speed up delivery, and make them longer? i know, i know, you get us hooked and then we're *sooo* demanding! :D
awesome work.
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Anonymous07/31/06
Dad's friends?
Great work, but what happens after chapter 4? It seems like that one left on a bit of a cliffhanger and this one picks up somewhere completely different.
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Anonymous08/01/06
First Ally and now Carol? Whew and Wow!!
Carol reminds me a lot of myself and my adventures flashing strangers in public. I used to visit Literotica once a week or so, now it is everyday in anticipation of reading more. I like the progression of your stories as they build to new experiences. Most writers tend to jump right to the hard core stuff but for a woman, it is the guiding or education which you work so well that turns me on. I look forward to reading more of Carol only don't leave us all hanging for so long ha ha. Some of us need our flinchy fix daily!!
Love and kisses, cheryl
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Love the Story!
I use to check Literotica once a week for new stories. I now find myself checking every day to see if you have posted another chapter. Its not just the story line its the way you tell it. I really enjoy how you write! I loved the line "It felt like Carol and I were breathing from the same lungs, thinking with the same mind." I know many of us have experienced that feeling ... and it is so intense. Looking forward hopefully to many more chapters. Thanks
these stories are truly wonderful, but ...
...they're not getting submitted fast enough to maintain the heat between episodes, and the chapters aren't long enough to get off to. :( given the delicious quality of your writing, that's tragic.
is there any way you can speed up delivery, and make them longer? i know, i know, you get us hooked and then we're *sooo* demanding! :D
awesome work.
Dad's friends?
Great work, but what happens after chapter 4? It seems like that one left on a bit of a cliffhanger and this one picks up somewhere completely different.
First Ally and now Carol? Whew and Wow!!
Carol reminds me a lot of myself and my adventures flashing strangers in public. I used to visit Literotica once a week or so, now it is everyday in anticipation of reading more. I like the progression of your stories as they build to new experiences. Most writers tend to jump right to the hard core stuff but for a woman, it is the guiding or education which you work so well that turns me on. I look forward to reading more of Carol only don't leave us all hanging for so long ha ha. Some of us need our flinchy fix daily!!
Love and kisses, cheryl
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