All Comments on 'King of the Jungle Ch. 03'

enjoyed this story, and as I have never read what everyone else is saying it sounds like, it was really good.

I liked your story alot. I'm also a big fan of Feehan's work. I really don't see the resemblance to her book. You don't even write with the same style. Don't let it get you down and keep writing more for us to read.

it doesnt matter that it was similar to another story. it is still good. you should delete all the negative comments because u didnt plagiarize intentionally. keep on writing.

I thought it was a great story! Loved it!

this story is really great, although i would love it more if it were longer, hehe. and you took the time to respond to your readers. please keep writing!

i lovedthis and the other 3 stories along with this one i havent read this other persons book but i do say any who dont likethis storie must be on crack or someother drug

I have read Freehan's stuff and I couldn't see any thing the same, cept maybe the whole shape shifting to animals. But other then that its a totally different story. I wish there had been more. If you ever need help comming up with names, you let me know... I'll help

i have to admit it really funny well done and stuff like the idea of max and alec its really good fits in with it

i have to say i love darkangel and it works really well

And I'd also like to add that if people are going to get picky about stories with similar plots then they're in for a lot of strife. Take, for example, the number of stories out there with King Arther-style plots (You know, boy with no obvious talent is taken under wing of eccentric man and taught that he has magic/kingship/natural warrior abilities, saves world) is enormous, yet rarely are people criticised for using this very well known plot as a starting point. Inspiration comes from all sources, and practicing the skill of writing requires a lot of inspiration, so if you can take an idea from a story/news article/funny shaped cloud, then don't let anyone stop you from using it to create your own story. Go with what works for you.

By the way, loved this story! Short but sweet!:P

I have just finished reading Freehan book. It was good but I have to say that I enjoyed your story much better. The only thing that stuck out as the same was the shape shifting theme. Once again I loved this story and all of your others here on Literotica.

This was a great story line but it was extremely rushed. There was no character development at all. It definitely has potential but it really needs some tlc.

i liked it even if your geting bad coments about it being short or what not i liked it. its up to YOU the author what you want to do with the story. perfect ending perfect begining. i give you if i had three thumbs. three thumbs up so haaa. i wish you luck with your next story and i look forward to reading it-LJM

I did indeed like it but there were quite a few similarities as Christine Feehan is one of my fav authors. You didn't intentionally set out to write a story so very similar, so to the negative comment leavers I say grow up! This story is a good one and has a great feel to it. I liked it a lot. Keep writing! =^_^=

This story line is exactly the same as Christine Feehan's "Wild Rain"!!!

Ignore all the negative comments I thought the story was amazing sometimes some are just too long adn you lose interest but this was the perfect legnth to keep you going...thanks :D

a job VERY well done.

Very well done and a nice change from the werewolf stories. Cats rock!

my god, i was hooked, i love this!

I loved your story. Never heard of Christine Feehan till you mentioned it so I wasn't aware that this story was similar to anything she wrote. I was a bit disappointed with the ending but I guess you didn't want to offend anyone else judging from their previous comments. Hope you continue writing thou :) Good Luck!

Your little helper is terrible. First 2 chapters seemed promising though I wasn't completely enthralled, but this last chapter I couldn't even finish. Just.... Eww. Word choices and setting were lame and Ill thought.

Oh be civilized. The story itself is good but needs editing. Keep writing!!:):)