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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/23/06

very sexy

makes me shiver a little. C.o.S.

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by duddle14612/28/06

entrance.

A tiny creative spark ~ ignites. A beautiful poetic arrangement is born. I love some of the metaphors especially the line, "Muscles twang with lustful chords." This poet has a special way with words.

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by LeBroz02/07/07

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Nicely work metaphors where the action begins and then the nipples harden. The usual crude descriptions avoided; this is quality work.

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by LeBroz05/30/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.



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