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by RedHairedandFriendly07/31/06

*shivers*

Woody. . .you are worrying this writer. ;) Another great chapter for the story. This is coming along great. I'm growing concerned for Rita now. You have done wonderful and now I want to know what happens to not only Jonis, Jessica, Mitch, Tom, and Bailey, but Rita too. Thank you so much for writing in the Chain!

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by jushorny07/31/06

I Have To Agree

Red is right, its a really hot read and you have developed both Jonis and Rita quite a bit in this chapter

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by Ronnie Wachuka08/01/06

There are some MF's in bad need of killing

gotwood:

I think you've discovered the perfect candidate in Jonis. Can't wait for it to happen. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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