well written and full of reality...can't wait to read the rest.
Great effort. Your descriptions and stories always bring to mind fantasy and real life situations. You keep getting better with every submission. More please.
You have produced a number of stories in a short time. Please don't run out of ideas too soon! I want to read more and more from you.
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so far..so very good
well written and full of reality...can't wait to read the rest.
We have a winner!
Great effort. Your descriptions and stories always bring to mind fantasy and real life situations.
You keep getting better with every submission.
More please.
Keep going
You have produced a number of stories in a short time. Please don't run out of ideas too soon! I want to read more and more from you.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Monday Night or
More submissions by pagangirl.