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I cant imagine that sentiment being expressed any better!
I liked your poem a lot!
It very poignantly captures the need in all of us to have some one care for us ... in a special way.
I tried to express this in my story, "To Be Wanted," but you captured it much more concisely.
Nicely done.
Regards, DJ
Very Well Said
Magica, I have to say I loved what you wrote! You said it perfectly!!!
Good one
A very sensual poem. I liked the sentiment too.
ps. You forgot the eyes!
Mind and body
Both quite seductive!
The words
were beautiful, but the format looked really choppy. (with 6 For's) Maybe one would have sufficed and then grouped the delicious descriptions into 3 line stanzas. Either way, with a body like that she would be 'wanted' by 99% of the male population. (Plus a good many other women..haha)
lovely
beautiful imagery, felt like i could see the subjects body as if it were in front of me
^
I guess I'm part of that 99% of the male population and Amyfriend is right, you wouldn't have to ask me more than once.
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