All Comments on 'One Fertile Weekend'

Hi,

What is wrong with siblings having such fun? It shud be more common, just dont advertise it...

I like it much...

Luck

Les

Why isn't it finished? Hey the brother should knock up his sister and his girlfriend. The sister's boyfriend should take a hike.LOL

Brothers and sisters should fuck all the time. If he impregnates her all the better. Sibling sex is the absolute best.

I'm sure everyone knew she was going to be your sister, but it still made my dick throb! What a neat surprise. Especially, when there is talk of a threesome!!!

I wish there'd been just a few more sentences or a paragraph that wrapped this up. The firing the shot into the wrong pussy was superb, but now to finish this right & do it the justice it deserves, you need a Pt 2! I'll be waiting to see what cums of it!

Pretty hot story.

This was a hot story, but you need to finish it with a threesome, and maybe finding both girls are pregnant.

I REALLY DO THINK YOU SHOULD CONSIDER FINISHING IT!!!

I have said it before people who are talented writers should be allowed to write to their hearts content, and not be required to go analyze spread sheets all day and have to fit their God given talents in to the little free time we all have today.

I remember when my brother came in me during one of my fertile times and it took.

The writing is good and the setup and plot are thought out well, but the story lacks a conclusion. It feels like their is only a beginning and middle but no end to the story.

I believe that,

"Oh fuck! I thought you were Jennifer!" I whispered loudly.

SHOULD have been

"Oh fuck! I thought you were Sarah!" I whispered loudly.

Otherwise well done. Considering the age of the story, though, not likely to get fixed.

Fucking your sister or your aunt us REALLY the best of hot fucking ,if of course itt is consensual.This story is very hot,However it would be great if we could read a second chapter where the brother, his sister and his wife had a threesome and both women got pregnant!

Great story but not conclusion. 3 stars for not finishing

This was a great story, but you need to finish it with a threesome, with both girls getting pregnant.

Nice that Sarah didn't mind him fucking his sister and actually getting aroused by that.