One Fertile Weekend

siblings

Hi,
What is wrong with siblings having such fun? It shud be more common, just dont advertise it...
I like it much...
Luck
Les

GOOD FUCK STORY..BUT

Why isn't it finished? Hey the brother should knock up his sister and his girlfriend. The sister's boyfriend should take a hike.LOL

great story

Brothers and sisters should fuck all the time. If he impregnates her all the better. Sibling sex is the absolute best.

SEXY STORY!!

I'm sure everyone knew she was going to be your sister, but it still made my dick throb! What a neat surprise. Especially, when there is talk of a threesome!!!

oh yeah!

I wish there'd been just a few more sentences or a paragraph that wrapped this up. The firing the shot into the wrong pussy was superb, but now to finish this right & do it the justice it deserves, you need a Pt 2! I'll be waiting to see what cums of it!

Very Hot!

Pretty hot story.

This was a hot story, but you need to finish it with a threesome, and maybe finding both girls are pregnant.

So far so good, but......

I REALLY DO THINK YOU SHOULD CONSIDER FINISHING IT!!!

Said it before

I have said it before people who are talented writers should be allowed to write to their hearts content, and not be required to go analyze spread sheets all day and have to fit their God given talents in to the little free time we all have today.

My fertile time,

I remember when my brother came in me during one of my fertile times and it took.

An Okay Story

The writing is good and the setup and plot are thought out well, but the story lacks a conclusion. It feels like their is only a beginning and middle but no end to the story.

Wrong name

I believe that,
"Oh fuck! I thought you were Jennifer!" I whispered loudly.

SHOULD have been
"Oh fuck! I thought you were Sarah!" I whispered loudly.

Otherwise well done. Considering the age of the story, though, not likely to get fixed.